Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
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Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
Definitely an improvement.
Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
Sweet! I'll work on the other ones soon.
EDIT: I tried out an elongated skull thing on the chieftain and got rid of his flag. Yay, or nay? The last two are only slightly different, the head is shifted a bit.
Now that I put them on I've noticed a spot missing from the top of their heads, and from one of their necks.
EDIT: Fixed holes and rounded the heads.
Original:
EDIT: I tried out an elongated skull thing on the chieftain and got rid of his flag. Yay, or nay? The last two are only slightly different, the head is shifted a bit.
Now that I put them on I've noticed a spot missing from the top of their heads, and from one of their necks.
EDIT: Fixed holes and rounded the heads.
Original:
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You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
Adding a bunch of edits was getting ridiculous.
I made improvements on the pillager. Paint, or no paint?
I made improvements on the pillager. Paint, or no paint?
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You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
I still can't see them. 
edit: sorry I didn't realize there was a second page.
God I'm a idiot.
edit: sorry I didn't realize there was a second page.
God I'm a idiot.
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Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
All of them, or just the ones from earlier?
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You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
Sorry but the head problem is still there. The heads simply arn't detailed enough. But I have to say these are looking great, nice work!
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Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
Suggestions? I'm not sure how to improve them.
Expanding Wesnoth
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
Some of the time the heads are to small for their bodies. Keep up the good work.
Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
Which ones though? I need specifics.
Expanding Wesnoth
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
You need to learn to judge for yourself, try looking at units reference and you'll see that heard are actually exaggerated slightly. Particularly look at the elves section.someone wrote:Which ones though? I need specifics.
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Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
You're right about the elves heads, but does it really make that much of a difference?
Either way, here is a warrior with a larger head. Compare with my avatar.
Either way, here is a warrior with a larger head. Compare with my avatar.
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You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
I just added regular elf's head over yours. You can see the difference, can't you?
Hopefully, it helps you.
Hopefully, it helps you.
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Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
It makes a BIG difference. For now I'd suggest using mainline elf heads.someone wrote:You're right about the elves heads, but does it really make that much of a difference?
Either way, here is a warrior with a larger head. Compare with my avatar.
My spritework can be seen here.
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Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
What's the point of making a Frankenstein if you're just going to glue a desert elf head onto a desert elf body with little or no change?
Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
I agree. Plus, It's the head that makes them the people I'm trying to make. With elf heads they would be elves, which they are not.
EDIT: (yet another) attempt at sizing up the head.
EDIT: (yet another) attempt at sizing up the head.
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Expanding Wesnoth
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.