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Jetrel
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Post by Jetrel »

Neoriceisgood wrote:Could you please not have it stick it's butt out so far? It's really bothering me. :(
:P Seriously made my day - unlike most of my mistakes, which are just tragic and sad, that at least is funny.
nonobots wrote: I'm still not sure about the fur patterns. It looks like a friggin Hula dancer's dress. color is about right, but the way it's placed on the body needs work. Maybe just the groin and shoulders instead of this... tutu.
Odd as it might sound, try shifting the colors to a dark grey/brown. Just see how it looks.
mastalouist
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Post by mastalouist »

Honestly, I think the hair (or head fur) on your latest sprite needs some greater definition. Right now it kind of looks like a hat-especialy on in the in-game image! Add that to his skirt like bottom fur and his shawl like shoulder fur... He comes off as a bit of an old-granny-troll.

The images are looking good, though I prefered the standing trolls to the squating one!
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