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Re: Mechanical's art

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Doofus, I got this the other day, thanks for the advice :)
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two new versions of the fox: a fox with short legs, and a Fox with an elongated torso
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looks ok, i think long torso goes the trick fine
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a sketch of the firefox
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looks ok i guess, but the amount of fire is a bit too low
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I would suggest making the body larger (wider like the original fox). The snout seems very flat on the bottom side, maybe try adding more fur under the eye and cheek. Very nice though
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I did another sketch. Let's comment it
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pretty good, but i think the flame lacks color in the lower part (fire is usually brighter at the top, and darker at the bottom) overall really good
EDIT: oh, and maybe you can use the older sketch for like, a lvl1, while the new one being a lvl2, what do you think about it?
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My old outline for already dead (I stopped working) future Era. Just a skeleton in a hat)
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i think his TC hat lacks shading (use tc palette for that), he is missing his left (our right) boot, i wonder what was this guy supposed to do?
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Yeah, from hat I've missed) Shoes he lost in battle =D. If the era would still be alive - it would have been a fighter from the line of melee.

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Why is th era dead? You did great work here!
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I don't have enough time on it. Besides, I can't think of a good story, the descriptions and abilities of the fighters.

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can you at least post a zip (or any other format of compressed file) of your abandoned work on the forum, i am kinda curious, and maybe somebody might even consider maintaining that project, who knows
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It will be a little later. Yet, only a fraction of mechanized Union of tribes of orcs. And yet - finished up to the end of the skeleton, and the line of creatures - beasts.
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