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Re: Your opinion please

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You would need soldier in full plate, with bigger sword, and definitely with helmet (still showing face).
Though in my opinion, transition would still be a bit rapid.(Your lev3 looks more like lev4 to me...)
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Re: Your opinion please

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I don't know... It seems like the guy just gets HUMONGOUS. I mean, I can see him getting a ton of armor, but he seems almost overwhelmed with it. I agree with Shinobody on the current highest level looking like a Lv. 4, but that doesn't necessarily mean that it can't have a full helmet. Though, it seems, that your sprite is facing the wrong way. It should be facing the same way as the Lv. 1, not at the player.
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Great_Mage_Atari wrote:I don't know... It seems like the guy just gets HUMONGOUS. I mean, I can see him getting a ton of armor, but he seems almost overwhelmed with it. I agree with Shinobody on the current highest level looking like a Lv. 4, but that doesn't necessarily mean that it can't have a full helmet. Though, it seems, that your sprite is facing the wrong way. It should be facing the same way as the Lv. 1, not at the player.
Now, they are facing the same way:

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Re: Your opinion please

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A little better. The shoulder plates look very geometric. Maybe round them off?
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Re: Your opinion please

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These are all very cool. I really like the Demon-guys, althought the second one could use some armor.

Good work! :D
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Re: Your opinion please

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uncleshelby wrote:These are all very cool. I really like the Demon-guys, althought the second one could use some armor.

Good work! :D
Thanks. :D

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Maybe the actual lvl 3 should be lvl 4, I don't know what to do. :?

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Your sprites look Awesome! :D

I would say to make him lvl4, the jump between 2 and 3 is too big.
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Finrod wrote:Your sprites look Awesome! :D

I would say to make him lvl4, the jump between 2 and 3 is too big.
Thanks, but I think I'll give up. :(

I know that he have "big hands", but it's a human with a big armor, with a lot of resistence and a bit of movement points.

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Way better. Except the right arm of the 2nd Lv. guy looks stubby. He also looks a bit like Mega-Man :lol2:

Now, if you are thinking of incorporating these in a faction or era, then they need magenta for team colors.
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Great_Mage_Atari wrote:Way better. Except the right arm of the 2nd Lv. guy looks stubby. He also looks a bit like Mega-Man :lol2:

Now, if you are thinking of incorporating these in a faction or era, then they need magenta for team colors.
I have done those just for fun, so they only will have those colors.

And how about this:

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Re: Your opinion please

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Wait, are these made for BfW, or for your own amusement?
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Great_Mage_Atari wrote:Wait, are these made for BfW, or for your own amusement?
I think that I'm not good enough to make some for BfW.
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Re: Your opinion please

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We all know that these are frankensteined from Fire Emblem sprites, so they aren't even allowed to be uploaded as part of an UMC, right?

Good, just checking since nobody has mentioned it apparently :P
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Ah! Your right! Now I'm mad that I didn't see it... :(
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Zerovirus wrote:We all know that these are frankensteined from Fire Emblem sprites, so they aren't even allowed to be uploaded as part of an UMC, right?

Good, just checking since nobody has mentioned it apparently :P
Yes, but I said that I only made those for fun and I don't know that I can't upload this. Sorry and thanks,
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