Level 3 saurian (splitted from Unit Thread)

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Level 3 saurian (splitted from Unit Thread)

Post by Neoriceisgood »

Here is the level 3 Saurian :D

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get_hit_sound=hiss.wav
ability=skirmisher
	[attack] 
	name=spear
	range=short
	type=pierce
	damage=8
	number=5
		[frame]
		begin=-150
		end=-50
		image=saurian-champion-attack.png
		[/frame]
		[frame]
		begin=-50
		end=100
		image=saurian-champion-attack-melee.png
		[/frame]
	[/attack] 
	[attack] 
	name=spear
	range=long
	type=pierce
	damage=9
 	number=2
		[sound]
		time=-100
		sound=spear.wav
		[/sound]
		[frame]
		begin=-150
		end=-50
		image=saurian-champion-attack.png
		[/frame]
		[frame]
		begin=-50
		end=100
		image=saurian-champion-attack-ranged.png
		[/frame]
		[missile_frame]
		begin=-100
		end=0
		image=projectiles/spear-n.png
		image_diagonal=projectiles/spear-ne.png
		[/missile_frame]
	[/attack] 
[/unit]
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Post by fmunoz »

Nice Saurian but...
it looks too 2nd level. You know no ribbons, no goldguilded plate, no oversized shoulderpads ;-) It even still have its old wooden shield (from its time as a level 1 small lizard)
Otherwise stats seems ok.
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Yay! A level 3 Saurian... FINALLY!

I think fmunoz is right, maybe a silver/metal shield?
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if you read first post in this thread, you would know you should do no debating in this thread, only new unit suggestions that are completely hammered out. all posts not suggesting a new unit should be deleted (including this one).
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Post by Jetrel »

Neo just went and posted that without critique. He is free to do so for the drakes, but, uhm, he should really have asked about this one.

Truly, from working on a project like this, you develop a sense of when something is excellent and beyond reasonable criticism, and when there is something lacking.

I am able to do the former occasionally - for example, the mermen have had no complaints, IIRC. Still, much of my other work has taken a lot of words to beat it into shape, and rightfully so.

Neo's "not good enough" alert should have been beeping for this one...
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Dave wrote:Per Shade's suggestion, this thread is for people to post images, including animations, sounds, and stats for their completed units.

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Post by atoi »

Probably all these posts will be deleted in a matter of minutes. Sorry for posting, i was following fmunoz's lead.

And I don't think anyone saw this unit before it got posted in it's "final" form yes? At least I'd never seen it... not that it matters.. but no one was able to give input anywhere.
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Post by atoi »

Now that this has been split... I would request that this Saurian get a larger shield, like the one that is riding Godzilla in the other thread has. =D
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atoi wrote:Now that this has been split... I would request that this Saurian get a larger shield, like the one that is riding Godzilla in the other thread has. =D
i concur.

right now, there is no real difference between this and the 2nd level unit. I can tell the difference in they are both on-screen, but i can't tell which is which. With most units, like hero -> champion, i can.
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Post by Neoriceisgood »

Bah someone give this guy the spear, I'm not in the mood to make a fully animated thing atm.
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oooh! I like the shield! good job!
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Post by turin »

looks good... but whats up with the red and white on the shield? i thought it was metal...
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Post by atoi »

the edges are metal.
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Post by Plasticgod »

turin wrote:looks good... but whats up with the red and white on the shield? i thought it was metal...
Metal shines, you know :roll:
The red is wood(?), in the center it acts like a support for the shield.
I think that is a nice idea to make shields composed with various materials.
I dont think that Lizards can be really good smithers, so they'll have to find other ways to defend themeselves, and a shield composed in part by metal and wood(?) looks pretty good.
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Plasticgod wrote:
turin wrote:looks good... but whats up with the red and white on the shield? i thought it was metal...
Metal shines, you know :roll:
not red, and not that brightly.
Plasticgod wrote:The red is wood(?), in the center it acts like a support for the shield.
i know, but why is it bright red? it looks... odd.
Plasticgod wrote:I think that is a nice idea to make shields composed with various materials.
I dont think that Lizards can be really good smithers, so they'll have to find other ways to defend themeselves, and a shield composed in part by metal and wood(?) looks pretty good.
IMHO it doesn't. especially one composed of bright red wood, bright white cloth, and dull metal... :P
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