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Afex's Wizard

Post by Afex »

So heres a wizard that i made, based on the human mage. I added a wizards hat to his head(why theres only hoods?), and changed the colors to blue. Hope you like it. Building criticism acceptded of course :wink: .
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The problem with changing all the pink colors to blue is that the pink serves a purpose--It allows us to change the color of the pink areas to the colors of each side (red, blue, green, etc), so making it all 1 color is defeating the purpose of that.


The hat could use *some* work however, as the outlines are very dark, thick, and jagged. Look at how the edges of the rest of the sprite are, and try imitating that ^__^
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Re: Afex's Wizard

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Also, the perspective of the hat is weird. And you should also use transparent background.
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Re: Afex's Wizard

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Yes, the hat seems on the large side and is on the side of his head. If you did the colouring pixel by pixel then nice shading on the blue stuff.
I attempted tofix some major thingsbut not the transparent background.
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Re: Afex's Wizard

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To me it looks even more weird now... I think that its to small now. But that may be just me.
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No i thinks its realy to small too.
Looks a bit funny like a party hat :lol2:
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I agree... It's small.
Really small. And it looks like a little weird shape to me, but it might be only me, though.
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Post by Turuk »

It looks weird because the hat as it was redesigned is not only small, but it sits on the top of the head with no sense of fitting around the mage's brow. The hat should come down a little over his forehead and hair, and sag a bit to the northwest given the direction he is facing.
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