A quick frankie
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- Evilninjamonkey
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A quick frankie
Here's a Frankenstein I made in about 5 minutes today. Its not for anything but my own amusement, and for practice. Any comments?
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Re: A quick frankie
This should probably be in Art Workshop, not contrib...
anyway... The hammer seems to be in weird perspective, sort of unaligned with the hand holding it. IMO it should come out toward the camera/viewer more. The shield could also be a bit bigger. Looks pretty fierce, though. Unlike many frankies, the parts actually seem to go to together instead of being a random mishmash of amputated armatures and equipment.
anyway... The hammer seems to be in weird perspective, sort of unaligned with the hand holding it. IMO it should come out toward the camera/viewer more. The shield could also be a bit bigger. Looks pretty fierce, though. Unlike many frankies, the parts actually seem to go to together instead of being a random mishmash of amputated armatures and equipment.
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Re: A quick frankie
I like it, even when it's only weapons and kilt on a behemoth. 
I like it, because of what Corvvs already said, I mean, that the weapons look good together with the person who has them.

I like it, because of what Corvvs already said, I mean, that the weapons look good together with the person who has them.

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Re: A quick frankie
Yes, the perspective does seem to match pretty well.
However, I'd suggest TCing the kilt/shorts instead since dense red on green is kinda hard on the eyes.
However, I'd suggest TCing the kilt/shorts instead since dense red on green is kinda hard on the eyes.

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