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Post by Troy »

wow :shock: , your good!
well, all for the better good than for the bad good.

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Post by vonHalenbach »

Yeah, really quite good. I would find it more realistic, if its ears were not that pointy.
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Post by Zhukov »

His facial features (eyes nose etc) are all over the place.
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Post by Simons Mith »

It's an OK troll - in fantasy, many of them do have grotesque/distorted visages. But I don't think it's a very good Wesnoth troll.
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dwarf sketch
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Post by Pickslide »

A fine start. But I'd like to put out there, since no one else has yet:

ANATOMY!

http://www.fineart.sk/index.php?cat=12

Yes, I own this book.
I've gone through it.
Repeatedly.

But keep drawing! Its good you've gotten started coloring as well, as this takes lots of practice too. Try to pay more attention to where your lighting is coming from, as I see a bit of "pillow shading", which is when you just make the middle of the shape brighter with no regard to what's really more illuminated.
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Post by coixcoix »

thanks for book link, that is good.
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Post by Drake General »

Aren't the trolls nowadays gray, not green?
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female human
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Post by Redeth »

coixcoix wrote:female human
Nice, reminds me of Grace Jones :shock:
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i like Grace Jones :)
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Post by Shadow »

I can't put a name to the face but I like the result.
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Post by Weeksy »

Very well done, but the thick noses on all your portraits remind me of the time a big chunk of my nose got ripped out and it was horrendously swollen with stitches and anesthesia for about a week. :)
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Post by Jetrel »

Weeksy wrote:Very well done, but the thick noses on all your portraits remind me of the time a big chunk of my nose got ripped out and it was horrendously swollen with stitches and anesthesia for about a week. :)
Be nice - honestly, the noses aren't as off as I've seen in a lot of other drawings. This artist does need more -control- over the subject matter, but I've seen orders of magnitude worse.
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