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I tried editing it but...........Jetryl wrote:Not bad, Disto. As you guys said, the fire lacks the chromatic/luminous intensity of real fire, but the composition ain't bad.
I may take a swing at editing that, one of these days.
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Disto, you should have a look at khanstant's flaming arrows here http://www.wesnoth.org/forum/viewtopic. ... 877#153877
I don't like the composition, yours is better, but his rendering of fire is good, and it's very saturated. you can saturate even more...
I don't like the composition, yours is better, but his rendering of fire is good, and it's very saturated. you can saturate even more...
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Well this is as saturated as it goes.Boucman wrote:Disto, you should have a look at khanstant's flaming arrows here http://www.wesnoth.org/forum/viewtopic. ... 877#153877
I don't like the composition, yours is better, but his rendering of fire is good, and it's very saturated. you can saturate even more...
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Maybe something like this?
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There is a fish stabbed on it...
It looks like that IMO.
The trident does not look metallic.
It looks pretty flat.
Decide where the light comes from. At yours, it comes from everywhere. Take variations.
Make strong shadows opposed to the light.
Increase the contrast.
->Dare to enlight the lighter parts very much. Be sure of what you draw, because else it looks aliased and could lead to under-saturation. It happens to me too.

The trident does not look metallic.
It looks pretty flat.
Decide where the light comes from. At yours, it comes from everywhere. Take variations.
Make strong shadows opposed to the light.
Increase the contrast.
->Dare to enlight the lighter parts very much. Be sure of what you draw, because else it looks aliased and could lead to under-saturation. It happens to me too.
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Ah... fire... It's far more complex than red and yellow stuff put together isn't it?
I sharpened the bow, added some burning effects to the arrow, a little smoke here and there and some movement to the flame (as if there was wind coming from the 'right' side of the picture).
Sorry, I couldn't resist the temptation to do my own little version.

I sharpened the bow, added some burning effects to the arrow, a little smoke here and there and some movement to the flame (as if there was wind coming from the 'right' side of the picture).
Sorry, I couldn't resist the temptation to do my own little version.

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Ascendant, that looks much better. But what I mean specifically was more like these:
http://web.mit.edu/first-east/www/img/m ... derman.jpg
or the one I've attatched
http://web.mit.edu/first-east/www/img/m ... derman.jpg
or the one I've attatched
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