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I don't like him but don't know what it is that I don't like

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The left hand, teeth and the eyes have some work to be done on as I see it

And there is no highlights in this one so they are left to do to.

Took a picture after that was drawn and saw that my self and decided I'm in a very close resemblance to a goblin over all But I think I was to stiff in the picture to so might have to redraw the hand again it probably should be sloping down a bit at the wrist to if your somewhat relaxed

The slinker is supposed to be having his thumb under his belt and leaning his hand on that. Guess it needs more work

Changed the eyes a bit, not sure how noticeable it is tho
Lowered the head father down a bit
Added the shadow to the knife
Added some reflections in the knife to


What about the backpack or do I dare to call this one finished now ?

Really like the last two ones, maybe change the sword angle a bit on either one only to signify a change. The cape or whatever its called is very noticeable only think I would like something more between the levels

The sketch of the slinker. Any kind of comments are welcome


btw the other ones started out just like this so don't worry that the style is already changing

Was thinking about starting with the next unit the slinker while waiting for reply on this one but I have no idea how his darts would look like is it blowing darts with the pipe or is it something like this Atatl or is it really throwing darts like in the dart game ? Feel free to explain in words ho...

Not really sure where your going with that diagonal line in the eye but added it to the best of my understanding of it. Added a horrible looking backpack in one of the picture think it adds something tell me if its preferable and I redraw it properly so it doesn't look that bad ( its suposed to be a...

The cook

* Added some highlight and shadow this time * Decreased the knifes size * Decreased the size of one eye think the evenness before was making him look less "shifty" to * Added some pink in his ears that I had somehow forgotten before but was planning to add I know the knife doesn't cast any...

Admit it it was the .fun. in the file name that gave it away right?

Maybe should write about the changes I did :) Increased the eye size Messed around with the pupils tho I never really understood what was wrong so it might still be wrong they are the same size now and more in the middle of the colored part of the eye ( forgot the word ) Added a neck Decided not to ...

I attach the svg file along here then so you can mess around with that to and the head and knife is grouped but unsure how that works in other programs then inkscape if it follows along as well. Did one image to show that its easy to change position and size with the svg leave it up to you to figure...

Thought it prudent to summaries stuff in the beginning. So these are things that are finished ones, but ofcourse still open to suggestions and comments. Goblin Forager: http://exong.net/wesnoth-attach/files/goblin_foragersvg_145.png Not much yet but still somewhat more ordered I think. :) ----------...