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capitol wrote:Some runes have the power to weaken their enemy while other creates mirages that fools them to attack their friends.
Maybe you meant to say
'...others create mirages that fool..'

as opposed to
'...other creates mirages that fools...'

One other thing, using 'their' multiple times in one sentence with multiple subjects is ambiguous.
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What's more, it needs an apostrophe (enemies')
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Post by Elvish_Pillager »

Breeblebox wrote:
Ankka wrote:Enemies. Not enemys.
Umm, actually no.

enemy's

The attack belongs to his enemy =]
Wrong still!

It's enemies', since enemy is both possessive and plural.
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Elvish Pillager wrote:
Breeblebox wrote: Umm, actually no.

enemy's

The attack belongs to his enemy =]
Wrong still!

It's enemies', since enemy is both possessive and plural.
And this is what I had in the first place. :}
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Post by Ankka »

Elvish Pillager wrote:
Breeblebox wrote: Umm, actually no.

enemy's

The attack belongs to his enemy =]
Wrong still!

It's enemies', since enemy is both possessive and plural.
Oops... I was thinking I might have still missed something... :? gah.
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Are we going to discuss about this now?Maybe he\she doesn't know how it is (and believe me, he\she's not the only one! :!: ).
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Post by Maeglin Dubh »

This did not need to be revived. I've already had to delete on of your posts for sheer pointlessness, Greek. Try not to continue this trend.
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Greek Maniac wrote:Are we going to discuss about this now?Maybe he\she doesn't know how it is (and believe me, he\she's not the only one! :!: ).
Please don't revive 2 year old topics, especially if you have nothing to add to them. You can find the date in the top of the posts.

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