Vranca´s sprites
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Re: Vranca´s sprites
Yea I would like to help if can, I like the idea of a spartan faction. I always loved playing the lavanians in the imperial era and they are based on the roman empire I believe. I only just recently started playing with The GIMP (lol funny every time), so I'm not some amazing graphical artist, but I can make sprites and won't hand over something that looks like trash.
Re: Vranca´s sprites
Well how about you try something like this or this and we´ll see how it goes 
EDIT:They are sopose to be persian lv1 spearman so don´t make them too big or too small(something like default spearman is good).
EDIT:They are sopose to be persian lv1 spearman so don´t make them too big or too small(something like default spearman is good).
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Philip II of Macedon:"If I win this war, you will be slaves forever."
The Spartan ephors:"If."
Subsequently, both Philip and Alexander would avoid Sparta entirely.
Philip II of Macedon:"If I win this war, you will be slaves forever."
The Spartan ephors:"If."
Subsequently, both Philip and Alexander would avoid Sparta entirely.
Re: Vranca´s sprites
Hows this for a start? Any tips on how I can make it look better and make proper shadows are appreciated.
I lined the shoulders and waist up with the loyalist spearman somewhat so his stance is pretty similar, but does he look too small? do I need to make him taller? The magenta (i think thats the colors name), stripes on him are team colored. I also am going to give him meaner eyes and I think he would look more "arab" if his tunic was recolored to the same color as his headpiece.
I lined the shoulders and waist up with the loyalist spearman somewhat so his stance is pretty similar, but does he look too small? do I need to make him taller? The magenta (i think thats the colors name), stripes on him are team colored. I also am going to give him meaner eyes and I think he would look more "arab" if his tunic was recolored to the same color as his headpiece.
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Re: Vranca´s sprites
It´s pretty good,but the shield arm doesn´t look like it´s relaxed and he looks like he is looking south instead south-east.
The main issue is that you seem to be using lots of different shades of one color and that isn´t supposed to be used. I´ll make a new thread for the era art so could someone move his post in there?
The main issue is that you seem to be using lots of different shades of one color and that isn´t supposed to be used. I´ll make a new thread for the era art so could someone move his post in there?
My sprites,My Minitroops
Philip II of Macedon:"If I win this war, you will be slaves forever."
The Spartan ephors:"If."
Subsequently, both Philip and Alexander would avoid Sparta entirely.
Philip II of Macedon:"If I win this war, you will be slaves forever."
The Spartan ephors:"If."
Subsequently, both Philip and Alexander would avoid Sparta entirely.
Re: Vranca´s sprites
I did this for some practise on animations,but i'm not happy with it,what is there to improve?
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My sprites,My Minitroops
Philip II of Macedon:"If I win this war, you will be slaves forever."
The Spartan ephors:"If."
Subsequently, both Philip and Alexander would avoid Sparta entirely.
Philip II of Macedon:"If I win this war, you will be slaves forever."
The Spartan ephors:"If."
Subsequently, both Philip and Alexander would avoid Sparta entirely.
Re: Vranca´s sprites
1. His left (our right) hand is constantly stationary. Why?
2. No leg movement at all. Or cape movement, even though he's bobbing.
3. Looking closely, there's actually a spearshaft behind his right (our left) leg, which doesn't move and gives the general impression of a bendy shaft, which looks bad.
2. No leg movement at all. Or cape movement, even though he's bobbing.
3. Looking closely, there's actually a spearshaft behind his right (our left) leg, which doesn't move and gives the general impression of a bendy shaft, which looks bad.
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Re: Vranca´s sprites
...what's he doing?
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Re: Vranca´s sprites
So he's that bad......what's he doing?
He's should look like he's breathing,but it's my first attempt to try animating so i guess it's not any good.
I am also doing this sprite based on this image:
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My sprites,My Minitroops
Philip II of Macedon:"If I win this war, you will be slaves forever."
The Spartan ephors:"If."
Subsequently, both Philip and Alexander would avoid Sparta entirely.
Philip II of Macedon:"If I win this war, you will be slaves forever."
The Spartan ephors:"If."
Subsequently, both Philip and Alexander would avoid Sparta entirely.