Ashen Hearts [SP Drake Campaign for 1.12.6]

[revolting_peasant]

I'm not saying that scenario 3 is problematic the way it is... actually, the only thing I would ask is that it is somehow more obvious who might be able to pick the sword up. As for the tree - it's fine that getting there is not obvious. I'm not even sure I would add a marker. A subtle hint, or no hint, would probably be enough.

[revolting_peasant]

In the Walkthrough for Scenario 4, it says:

The yetis won't step on the water/ice.

... but they actually do step on the water/ice. At least to get to the island on the like

Not getting the elvish bloodmaiden doesnt hinder you from finishing the campaign. But you can get a nice amulet in the next scenario if you do.

No amulet in scenario 4... ah, you must mean scenario 5. Also, I would think there should be some dialog with the Elf maiden in Scenario 4, even if it's just filler. That is, she only followed the Drakes to find some guy, and now it turns out he's nowhere to be found, while the Drakes are making plans to go somewhere the Elf wasn't expecting.

[revolting_peasant]

What do you guys think about the possibility of giving Elri's Amulet to Uluthur instead of Herkarth?

[Kwandulin]

Good idea, you'll need Uluthur later on

[revolting_peasant]

In Scenario 7 I think the walkthrough should make it explicit whether you need an L2-only unit of each of the 5 categories of drakes, or whether L3 units are also acceptable.

Also, at the end of that scenario,

Spoiler:

Khazran says that he wants the Drakes to enslave all other races. That doesn't make sense. Enslavement is for purposes of labor and production; but large-scale production is not a pursuit of the Drakes, so it doesn't make sense for them to want to enslave anybody. That is doubly the case for Khazran, who should not be concerned very much with other races, except for them to get out of his way, or perhaps to kill or to prey on.

[egallager]

Hi, I made some edits to this campaign while playing it, which can be found here: https://github.com/cooljeanius/wesnoth_ ... hen_Hearts
Basically, to summarize, I needed more time to do S05 (The Runic Gate), and in general I needed to manually recruit some things I hadn't gotten by advancing units, since I'm bad at keeping stuff alive. Anyways, good campaign though; I even stole the clockwork dragon for use in a different campaign I was editing.