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Re: A New Order art

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alhaz wrote:The forearm have too thick wrist IMO thats why its a bit weird.
And to short too, isn't it?
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Adamant14 wrote:
alhaz wrote:The forearm have too thick wrist IMO thats why its a bit weird.
And to short too, isn't it?
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What about the Lorin's arm?
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szopen wrote:What about the Lorin's arm?
her forearm looks a bit long and the hands are quite small (not sure if they are supposed to be), but im no expert on anatomy drawing. i like that she is generally stronger looking and not so innocent and friendly as the previous sketch. the guy also looks right.

the brighter lighting and detail helps. i wonder if it is possible to have some debris and one or two small animals, such as a rat or cat or chicken, running around (unless this is located in a noble's courtyard with servants to keep it clean).
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The right answer: the elbow joint is too low. it should be more of a \ angle.
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Just to let you know, I don't know what's happening with Łukasz - this is the larger break in my communication with him.
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i hope he is well. i dont know the cost of living there but i doubt anyone is getting rich off Wesnoth UMC art work :(
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Łukasz answered today and explained he had also other, larger project on his head (which was presumably also better paid :) :) )

Anyway, here it is:
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What do you think? This supposed to be first days of winter or last days of autumn.
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tr0ll wrote: have you seen the storyboard sketches LordBob made in another topic?
A link, please?
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szopen wrote:What do you think? This supposed to be first days of winter or last days of autumn.
In that case, I'd make the grass less green. Right now it looks really vibrant and, well, green, so I get the impression it's either spring or summer, possibly early fall. If it's supposed to be late fall or early winter, I would think that the grass would be browner/yellower, assuming we're not in a tropical climate here. There's also a bit of a tangent happening in the upper right with the end of the hammer handle and the dangling strap of leather on the person in the foreground there, which makes it look like the leather loop is somehow connected to the hammer handle (intentional?).
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szopen wrote:
tr0ll wrote: have you seen the storyboard sketches LordBob made in another topic?
A link, please?
If you still need the link: http://forums.wesnoth.org/viewtopic.php ... 98#p549698
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First sketch of Grekulak by Łukasz Zaręba.

Łukasz is having more better paid work recently, so he warned me that he will only finish current work queue and may not get more commissions for currently set prices.
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This artist is offering 5 dollar commissions. His skills look great.

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Wussel wrote:This artist is offering 5 dollar commissions. His skills look great.

Warning: NSFW link, mature content.
Yes, but "the personal use only" scares me off :)
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Re: A New Order art

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szopen wrote:First sketch of Grekulak by Łukasz Zaręba.

Łukasz is having more better paid work recently, so he warned me that he will only finish current work queue and may not get more commissions for currently set prices.
gregulak.jpg
You all knew Grekulak - desperately trying to look human, moderately insane necromant
Excellent! :) waiting for final version.
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