uncleshelby's art

[uncleshelby]

This is just a thread where I will post all my art, and (hopefully) get feedback.

The aim of this thread is so that I can get better at Wesnoth art, and hopefully I will.

This is my first sprite ever:

floating-eye.png (3.38 KiB) Viewed 5039 times

And this is my second sprite, a human flag-bearer:

flag-bearer-1.png (4.11 KiB) Viewed 5039 times

And finally, my "Elvish Guard":

elvish-guard.png (4.32 KiB) Viewed 5039 times

Thanks for any feedback!

[lipk]

Hmmm.... if that eye is really floating, where does it drop the shadow? Right know it looks as it was lying on the ground.
And that flag... rather looks like a snow shovel.

[Great_Mage_Atari]

The elve's arm and shield need more shading and outlining

[uncleshelby]

Better?

[Great_Mage_Atari]

Needs a little less now.

[uncleshelby]

Alrighty, here it is.

[Great_Mage_Atari]

Better. Spear could use some though.

[uncleshelby]

Use some... Shading?

[Great_Mage_Atari]

Precisely. It looks sorta blurry.

[uncleshelby]

Now I think I've got it!

P.S. It looks more blurry on the forums than in the GIMP.

[Great_Mage_Atari]

Much better. I suggest you also add some outlining to your shield

[uncleshelby]

Now, (hopefully), the final, perfected version!

[Great_Mage_Atari]

A little better. I think the problem is that your using a lot of light colors along the edges, giving it a more fuzzy feel

[uncleshelby]

I added more dark colors around the edge, is it better?

[Great_Mage_Atari]

Much better.