uncleshelby's art
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uncleshelby's art
This is just a thread where I will post all my art, and (hopefully) get feedback.
The aim of this thread is so that I can get better at Wesnoth art, and hopefully I will.
This is my first sprite ever: And this is my second sprite, a human flag-bearer: And finally, my "Elvish Guard": Thanks for any feedback!
The aim of this thread is so that I can get better at Wesnoth art, and hopefully I will.
This is my first sprite ever: And this is my second sprite, a human flag-bearer: And finally, my "Elvish Guard": Thanks for any feedback!
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Re: uncleshelby's art
Hmmm.... if that eye is really floating, where does it drop the shadow? Right know it looks as it was lying on the ground.
And that flag... rather looks like a snow shovel.
And that flag... rather looks like a snow shovel.
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Re: uncleshelby's art
The elve's arm and shield need more shading and outlining
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Re: uncleshelby's art
Better?
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Re: uncleshelby's art
Needs a little less now.
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Re: uncleshelby's art
Alrighty, here it is.
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Re: uncleshelby's art
Better. Spear could use some though.
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Re: uncleshelby's art
Precisely. It looks sorta blurry.
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Re: uncleshelby's art
Now I think I've got it!
P.S. It looks more blurry on the forums than in the GIMP.
P.S. It looks more blurry on the forums than in the GIMP.
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Re: uncleshelby's art
Much better. I suggest you also add some outlining to your shield
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Re: uncleshelby's art
Now, (hopefully), the final, perfected version!
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Re: uncleshelby's art
A little better. I think the problem is that your using a lot of light colors along the edges, giving it a more fuzzy feel
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Re: uncleshelby's art
I added more dark colors around the edge, is it better?
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