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Garm
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by Garm October 29th, 2005, 6:00 pm
a silvermage profile, in the game th hood is grey, should I change it?Moderator's Note: Properly scaled image.
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Tomsik
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by Tomsik October 29th, 2005, 6:31 pm
Sorry, but it dont looks too good.
Disto
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by Disto October 29th, 2005, 6:48 pm
Far too big........... and also out of proportion but i can see you've put a lot of work into it, quite alot of detail.
Garm
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by Garm October 29th, 2005, 7:19 pm
would it be better if i make the head smaller?
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Disto
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by Disto October 29th, 2005, 7:24 pm
Yes, but also you need to make the entire thing smaller.
Garm
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by Garm October 30th, 2005, 8:41 am
one more try
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Corwin
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by Corwin October 30th, 2005, 3:12 pm
It looks like the shoulders are too high, kind of like he is shrugging. I think it looks okay, but needs some work before it will be good enough. Good effort though.
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Garm
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by Garm October 30th, 2005, 3:24 pm
Corwin wrote: It looks like the shoulders are too high, kind of like he is shrugging. I think it looks okay, but needs some work before it will be good enough. Good effort though.
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Garm
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by Garm October 30th, 2005, 3:41 pm
Better?!
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Heliomaster
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by Heliomaster October 30th, 2005, 5:00 pm
The hands look really good, but I have to agree with Corwin about the shoulders. Also I think the neck is a bit thick, and maybe he should smile?
Emmanovi
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by Emmanovi October 30th, 2005, 7:44 pm
Can you get him holding the staff next to him? It might make it clearer who he is.
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by irrevenant October 31st, 2005, 10:23 am
You've clearly put a lot of work into the shading etc. but IMO the basic proportions need more work before those finishing touches are applied.
toms
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by toms November 7th, 2005, 5:14 pm
I would use another colour for the belt.
He looks very fierce
And he should have a staff.
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toms
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by toms November 18th, 2005, 4:16 pm
I hadn´t time, but now here are some edits on the original on:
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toms
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by toms November 18th, 2005, 4:18 pm
Good airbrushing on this img
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