Art for The Silver Lands - Ice Wyrm sprite
Moderator: Forum Moderators
Forum rules
Before posting critique in this forum, you must read the following thread:
Before posting critique in this forum, you must read the following thread:
Re: Art for The Silver Lands - Ice Wyrm sprite
it's hard to judge if the new sorum'tars are better. They're just more human and..massive perhaps. The old ones on the other hand look more evil and beastly, less human. Well i don't know the whole of your project but i'd say both versions could be used for something. You might want to play around more with the gray part of his belly line, probably either reduce, expand or feather it more so it colouristically fits more to the remainder of those scales.
Like cats? I've made a whole faction of them to kick ass with!
Don't like cats? I've made a whole faction of them to kick their asses! So everyone's happy :)
Felinian faction is part of the Beyond Southern Hells era
kitties need sprites! art topic here
Don't like cats? I've made a whole faction of them to kick their asses! So everyone's happy :)
Felinian faction is part of the Beyond Southern Hells era
kitties need sprites! art topic here
Re: Art for The Silver Lands - Ice Wyrm sprite
You people are way too good at this... Stop making me feel bad.
-
- Posts: 1114
- Joined: December 9th, 2005, 2:38 am
Re: Art for The Silver Lands - Ice Wyrm sprite
I'm not sure what you're aiming for with the new Sorum'tar, but the new ones feel a little washed out to me...maybe you could bring back the dark capes?
And, I don't even need to say it, that ice dragon looks badass
And, I don't even need to say it, that ice dragon looks badass
Re: Art for The Silver Lands - Ice Wyrm sprite
The Ice Maiden seems to need more darker tones, especially her robes.
Re: Art for The Silver Lands - Ice Wyrm sprite
I realy like the ice wym dragon thing. nice work.
But i think maybe the ice princess should be more... icy maybe make the red into a more blue colour.
But i think maybe the ice princess should be more... icy maybe make the red into a more blue colour.
Re: Art for The Silver Lands - Ice Wyrm sprite
For some reason the ice crystals on the maiden and the earlier ice dragon look more organic in nature than real ice does.
Well, they are organic creatures, granted. But a more inorganic crystal look IMHO looks better.
-Ben
Well, they are organic creatures, granted. But a more inorganic crystal look IMHO looks better.
-Ben
- Aethaeryn
- Translator
- Posts: 1554
- Joined: September 15th, 2007, 10:21 pm
- Location: Baltimore, Maryland, USA
Re: Art for The Silver Lands - Ice Wyrm sprite
The level 1 is definitely an improvement. The level 3 might need some better shading. It doesn't look as good as the other two you made. The cloak looks fake.mystic x the unknown wrote:thanks for the replies. here are the others...
Sorum'tar from level 1 up
Sorum'tar's design is based on the old sprites, which arguably look better.
Aethaeryn (User Page)
Wiki Moderator (wiki)
Latin Translator [wiki=Latin Translation](wiki)[/wiki]
Maintainer of Thunderstone Era (wiki) and Aethaeryn's Maps [wiki=Aethaeryn's Maps](wiki)[/wiki]
Wiki Moderator (wiki)
Latin Translator [wiki=Latin Translation](wiki)[/wiki]
Maintainer of Thunderstone Era (wiki) and Aethaeryn's Maps [wiki=Aethaeryn's Maps](wiki)[/wiki]
Re: Art for The Silver Lands - Ice Wyrm sprite
I prefer the old ones, apart from the level 1.mystic x the unknown wrote:thanks for the replies. here are the others...
Sorum'tar from level 1 up
Sorum'tar's design is based on the old sprites, which arguably look better.
Re: Art for The Silver Lands - Ice Wyrm sprite
awesome art here...keep it up
- mystic x the unknown
- Posts: 88
- Joined: October 15th, 2005, 3:46 pm
Re: Art for The Silver Lands - Ice Wyrm sprite
I haven't abandoned these sprites and made some progress with them. I'm posting them though the Ice maiden is said to look different because of background reasons and Espreon is considering changing Sorum'tar as well.
you are not gonna make it
- Midnight_Carnival
- Posts: 836
- Joined: September 6th, 2008, 11:08 am
- Location: On the beach at sunset, gathering coral
Re: Art for The Silver Lands - Ice Wyrm sprite
You are doing something exactly right.
I don't know what, so I can't offer much help, but...
Make more.
I don't know what, so I can't offer much help, but...
Make more.
...apparenly we can't go with it or something.
Re: Art for The Silver Lands - Ice Wyrm sprite
Um... is the level three meant to be obese?
Re: Art for The Silver Lands - Ice Wyrm sprite
If the character in a red kimono is supposed to be a woman, her breasts are humongous. That is, in a bad way. Also, it could be argued that her head is a bit too small compared to Wesnoth standards, but I won't go into that - the main thing here is her chest, which has to be made smaller if you want to be serious with these. (:
"Oh, to the hades with the manners - he's a complete [censored], and calling him that insults bastards everywhere!"
-Nalia De'Arnise
-Nalia De'Arnise
Re: Art for The Silver Lands - Ice Wyrm sprite
The breast are big, for Wesnoth standards, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. A world full of moderately-breasted women is as artificial as one full of D-cups. Extremes happen in nature.
ride on shooting star