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hey again!
um, i'm not sure if i'm really back, but i did start something wesnoth related this evening and thought i'd share it. i am (or was? not sure) on kind of a wesnoth hiatus to concentrate on drawing basics - lots of anatomy, life drawings, still lifes and so on. of course i'm still far from where i want to be artwise (for that is a journey that should never end) but i feel i could start to squeeze in a portrait from time to time...
whatever, i promesid shadow master to do some portraits for invasion form the unknown. and thus could be a start for the young protagonist galas. and yeah, i said "start", i'm aware that he isn't shaded and the colours are only preliminary. the usual.
um, i'm not sure if i'm really back, but i did start something wesnoth related this evening and thought i'd share it. i am (or was? not sure) on kind of a wesnoth hiatus to concentrate on drawing basics - lots of anatomy, life drawings, still lifes and so on. of course i'm still far from where i want to be artwise (for that is a journey that should never end) but i feel i could start to squeeze in a portrait from time to time...
whatever, i promesid shadow master to do some portraits for invasion form the unknown. and thus could be a start for the young protagonist galas. and yeah, i said "start", i'm aware that he isn't shaded and the colours are only preliminary. the usual.
Last edited by kitty on December 20th, 2008, 9:01 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Hi kitty; welcome back!
That is a good start, but there is a protruding vein on the back of Galas' neck.
I know you said that these colors are not going to be permanent, but I am not sure if you knew; Galas' eyes are supposed to be blue (according to his character profile). Just wanted to make sure you were aware of this.
That is a good start, but there is a protruding vein on the back of Galas' neck.
I know you said that these colors are not going to be permanent, but I am not sure if you knew; Galas' eyes are supposed to be blue (according to his character profile). Just wanted to make sure you were aware of this.
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thanks for the welcome .
i know - the neck is still off, there is a major shadow cast by the fur-thingie missing. about the eyes - i know that they are supposed to be blue, but all my elves have grey eyes without pupils up to now, i'll see how blue looks like. i think the major problem is that he looks too old at the moment...
EDIT: i just realized that this thread should go into art workshop since iftu still isn't mainline... sorry!
i know - the neck is still off, there is a major shadow cast by the fur-thingie missing. about the eyes - i know that they are supposed to be blue, but all my elves have grey eyes without pupils up to now, i'll see how blue looks like. i think the major problem is that he looks too old at the moment...
EDIT: i just realized that this thread should go into art workshop since iftu still isn't mainline... sorry!
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Fixed.
I was wondering about the eyes too. Grey can be interpreted as a dull blueish grey easily enough, but Elynia's red-orange eyes will definitely stand out.
I was wondering about the eyes too. Grey can be interpreted as a dull blueish grey easily enough, but Elynia's red-orange eyes will definitely stand out.
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part of the reason i browse the forums is to check out your artwork Kitty. welcome back (if your back) and good luck.
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Kitty! You are back!
Ooh I like that portrait... It's so cool.
Ooh I like that portrait... It's so cool.
Check out my sprites!
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next incarnation of the galas portrait - finished shading (and yes, the eyes are blue now...)
any c&c?
and thanks for the nice comments!
any c&c?
and thanks for the nice comments!
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- Is his hair still flat (specifically, the top of his skull)?
- The sword outline looks aliased.
But nice job, as always. It's good to see you posting portraits here again. The materials of the breastplate and the furry trim are a nice touch.
- The sword outline looks aliased.
But nice job, as always. It's good to see you posting portraits here again. The materials of the breastplate and the furry trim are a nice touch.
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doofus, you have to click him, than he isn't pixelated anymore...
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Very nice kitty; I do not see any flaws in the portrait (other than the non-transparent background, but that can be easily rectified).
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Love it, as usual. The breastplate does look a little bit too clean, though - how about some nicks and scratches and such to show it's seen use?
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hmm
I havn't played IftU, and I can't help wondering...
is it a boy or a girl ?
it looks really androgyne to me... the slight dark line at the skull/hair junction (which looks to me like a badly placed wig) dosen't help...
fortunately, that's probably fixable by shading...
I havn't played IftU, and I can't help wondering...
is it a boy or a girl ?
it looks really androgyne to me... the slight dark line at the skull/hair junction (which looks to me like a badly placed wig) dosen't help...
fortunately, that's probably fixable by shading...
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thanks for the fast c&c! some minor touchups....
argl, i really, really hate how the browser messes my colours up! the skin looks so nice in phosho and here it looks like a peach. but i guess i should give up on that matter for i guess all monitors out there are pretty bad calibrated anyway. otherwise he is finished imho. unless ignacio has specific wishes...
shadow master - do you need the portraits also in 205*205 on black or do we just coollect them in 400*400 transparent?
sangel - i don't want his outfit to be too used, he is young and inexperienced and hasn't seen much battle before the campaign starts.
boucman - i fixed his hairline. and he is supposed to be a guy, albeit a very young one. something like the elvish equivalent to just out of puberty. i don't have a problem with slightly androgynous elves, they are just unwanted in mainline...
argl, i really, really hate how the browser messes my colours up! the skin looks so nice in phosho and here it looks like a peach. but i guess i should give up on that matter for i guess all monitors out there are pretty bad calibrated anyway. otherwise he is finished imho. unless ignacio has specific wishes...
shadow master - do you need the portraits also in 205*205 on black or do we just coollect them in 400*400 transparent?
sangel - i don't want his outfit to be too used, he is young and inexperienced and hasn't seen much battle before the campaign starts.
boucman - i fixed his hairline. and he is supposed to be a guy, albeit a very young one. something like the elvish equivalent to just out of puberty. i don't have a problem with slightly androgynous elves, they are just unwanted in mainline...
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ok, removing the line helped...
I still find him androgyne, but not unnaturally androgyne anymore
within the story, it shouldn't be a problem
thx for the fix
I still find him androgyne, but not unnaturally androgyne anymore
within the story, it shouldn't be a problem
thx for the fix
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Great portrait
Only thing I dislike is the lack of ''green'' in favour of a mainly brown but my opinion doesn't matter, great work though
Only thing I dislike is the lack of ''green'' in favour of a mainly brown but my opinion doesn't matter, great work though