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This is much better.
I can't wait to see your shaded version

Really nice undead.

The hands seems a bit too little and the axe looks odd. Perhaps a mistake about the perceptive.

I really like it but somehow, the shading seems a bit less good than yours previous work. It hasn't much relief.
Perhaps a bit more details on his beard.
I don't see anything else.

It is pretty nice but there is a minor issue: I don't think your work might go to mainline. You should propose it to the art workshop. Someone might be able to use it for an era or a campaign.

Great work. All of them has a real personnality.
Some shading would make them even better.

I think, the guys from Extended Era might be able to use it for the Kalifa faction.

Nice work. The shading seems fine to me. Nothing more to say except one thing: the ring which hold his neckerchief seems to be floating in the air. :hmm: This white stuff under his scarf confuses me. What is it? I would say that it's his shirt. It makes me think to a djellabah but it's not that odd....

His weapon is a bit strange. Perhaps a bit little for a troll hero?
The rest is pretty well done.

The sword looks really short, like a glorified dagger.

I agree. The blade is too short. It makes me think to a toy
The clothes are well done, except the collar which seems a bit unnatural. It's a bit too straight.

Anyway, it's a pretty good start. Keep working on it

Great, as usual.

I like his outfit a lot.

+1

Ok. I didn't succeed to make the morningstar later but I'll keep trying when I'll have enough time to do it.
Here's the second shot of the divine champion(the first one was pretty uggly...)

Is this one better? By the way: for the divine champion is it bad if I use a morningstar instead of a mace?

Happy to see you liked it. I'll try to animate it when I get the time.
Here's a new version of the divine knight according to the new crusader.

I see what you mean. In fact, I found the original design a bit mixed of gothic and light and I tried to keep this effect but a completely light warrior would probably go better to your idea of the Celestial.
Here's another shot with an open helmet.

I tried to follow your advice. Here's the result: crusader copie.png I find him a bit less "crusader". If a crusader is a warrior of the Gods, he still is in the less vertuous way to serve him. Fighting for Gods without showing his face sounded better in my mind. Anyway, the decision is yo...

Second work: the divine knight