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The way his tail stretches seems really un-natural to me. It looks too long and thing and straight when fully extended, and it still looks really stationary compared to the body

Also note that ironically, I do not spell-check or otherwise edit my corrections of your stuff. So its very possible I have misspelled words and errors. For the first several paragraphs I re-typed them by hand because I was looking at the dialogue in game instead of from the CFG files. So its possib...

Finished up dialogue fixes for the introduction and also fixed/improved some of the fixes I had previously posted. Obviously since the introduction is significantly longer then most of the dialogue in the Campaign, it needed significantly more editing. Before I really dive into this project more ful...

with some feedback I reworked the fire icons: http://s546.photobucket.com/albums/hh425/mystic_x/attack_icons/claws-flaming_B3.png http://s546.photobucket.com/albums/hh425/mystic_x/attack_icons/fire-breath_C4.png Those look incredibly realistic, a major improvement over the first version. I do feel ...

The way she is holding the arrow is very weird. Her one hand is posed like she is drawing the arrow back and ready to fire, but its not in position for that at all. It seems like its balanced on her left gauntlet and barely being touched by her right,

ditto on the eviscrator not looking good and the Behemoth having a different skin tone then the rest.

But I like the idea and I like the first levelup with the scythes

haven't forgotten about this just need to find the time

Part of the my problem with the left hand I think is that the thumb looks too similar and too parrallell to her other fingers. If you try such a pose yourself, you will notice that your thumb curves outward from the hand at a significant angle, but in your drawing it looks to be almost parrallel to ...

THe Staff on the newest Level 3 looks like its kind of bent to me

Perspective on the left hand looks a little weird

your pillar is WAY too tall

How many fireplaces do you know that billow out clouds of smoke that are 3x the height of the house itself?

been busy with school and the GF, I'll get back to dialogue at some point in the next week or two

Looks like he swings his shield way too far to the right on the defense animation. He would want it out in front of him, not that far to the side. Try doing that with your hand, its a really awkward angle for defense

I made changes in line with most of that, although it doesn't look as good as the example. Do I need to make the dress bottom wider (I need to tweak the dresse's shading too) ? http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt50/Aura-Warrior/MagiV6.png I'm going to put a staff in our right hand, and change the...

try this savefile Doofus