Female Wesnoth - Fencer
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Re: Female Wesnoth - Fencer
I haven't inspected the new Rogue sprites yet, which I definitely should. I will do a in-depth analyse of that at some later point. I could always go back and give the female fencer a much more distinguishable hairstyle then the rughish hairstyle of the male one - if thats what this unit line needs.
yes, the portraits will be playing a big role in this. but i don't want to try convincing a umc artist doing such portraits without me delivering the female sprites to this unit line first.
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Re: Female Wesnoth - Fencer
As it appears that, except of the hairstyle, the only changes are the male scarf become female boobs+accesior for the mainline rogue units.
So as a consequence, the one thing left for improvement is considering a completely new hairstyle.
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Re: Female Wesnoth - Fencer
The female fencer's boobs look quite a bit more pronounced than the thief's, though.
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Re: Female Wesnoth - Fencer
In fact, her chest isn't believable. I'm sure that a fencer with breasts that size would have to strap them down in some way in order to move properly, so you wouldn't see them like that.Pentarctagon wrote: ↑November 26th, 2018, 4:46 pm The female fencer's boobs look quite a bit more pronounced than the thief's, though.
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Re: Female Wesnoth - Fencer
Considering your both lasts comment, I think the right approach is to really change hairstyle and make that her dominant female characteristic and reduce the breast size.
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Re: Female Wesnoth - Fencer
here is the new hairstyle, which also takes away the focus from the breasts.
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Re: Female Wesnoth - Fencer
That is quite good!
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Re: Female Wesnoth - Fencer
Yep. The hair looks great
Maybe lighten up the shading around the boobs a bit? Clothing tends not to be snug in the middle and on the bottom in RL.
Maybe lighten up the shading around the boobs a bit? Clothing tends not to be snug in the middle and on the bottom in RL.
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Thanks for pointing it out. It might be taking away the focus from the breasts too, which would be a good thing.
Also I am planning a different stance for the female variant, but that has to be done in the idle-animation
Also I am planning a different stance for the female variant, but that has to be done in the idle-animation
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That is a good idea. I don't think a major shift is needed but a slightly different stance would help differentiate them more.
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Re: Female Wesnoth - Fencer
Personally, I think a ponytail would work better for a female fencer if you want long hair.
Re: Female Wesnoth - Fencer
That's a good idea, and also it would go flying around as much during the attack animation that way so it might be easier to draw.Celtic_Minstrel wrote: ↑March 13th, 2019, 5:01 am Personally, I think a ponytail would work better for a female fencer if you want long hair.
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Re: Female Wesnoth - Fencer
Well if thats the case, then i will probably draw a lot of inspiration from the female lv1 mage
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so i actually had some time to tinker
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Re: Female Wesnoth - Fencer
The shape of the ponytail is good, but the rest of her hair should not look like it is hanging down any more. The locks of hair need to point back towards the ponytail.
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