Hold my Bear I got this [DBL's Request thread]
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Re: Hold my Bear I got this [DBL's Request thread]
That portrait is going to be very good, I look forward to seeing it fully finished and colored! I personally prefer the style of this portrait to many of the mainline portraits in the game!
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Re: Hold my Bear I got this [DBL's Request thread]
Here it is. Full size, so open it at another tab.Embuck wrote:...
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Re: Hold my Bear I got this [DBL's Request thread]
Looks great! Thank you so much!
Re: Hold my Bear I got this [DBL's Request thread]
Impressive and awesome are the first two words that come to mind, that is a excellent portrait!
The only suggestion i have is personally i would not hold a sword as she is. The right hand barely seems to be touch the hilt. And perhaps you would be able to see the thumb under the first finger (that is bent). However, even if you make no changes this is a great portrait!
The only suggestion i have is personally i would not hold a sword as she is. The right hand barely seems to be touch the hilt. And perhaps you would be able to see the thumb under the first finger (that is bent). However, even if you make no changes this is a great portrait!
Creator of: The Reign of The Lords Era,The Gnats Franken Dungeon.
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Re: Hold my Bear I got this [DBL's Request thread]
It is unwise for human to doubt the agility of elves >:3The_Gnat wrote: Impressive and awesome are the first two words that come to mind, that is a excellent portrait!
The only suggestion i have is personally i would not hold a sword as she is. The right hand barely seems to be touch the hilt. And perhaps you would be able to see the thumb under the first finger (that is bent). However, even if you make no changes this is a great portrait!
I do things, including arts. Mostly fan arts.
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Re: Hold my Bear I got this [DBL's Request thread]
Well, in my uber default era addon there are plenty of high elves, dark elves, halflings, gnomes, desert nomads, dwarves, so if you fancy doing an portrait for any of the units in there that already does not already have one feel free to do so.
Superb art btw.
Superb art btw.
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Re: Hold my Bear I got this [DBL's Request thread]
I fancy doing any portrait but you must follow the rule while you are supposed be able to find easily.Eagle_11 wrote:Well, in my uber default era addon there are plenty of high elves, dark elves, halflings, gnomes, desert nomads, dwarves, so if you fancy doing an portrait for any of the units in there that already does not already have one feel free to do so.
Superb art btw.
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Re: Hold my Bear I got this [DBL's Request thread]
Hey DBL,
I know I've already had a go, so I'm very happy to let others go first, but I thought I'd post another character that I'd like to get a portrait for, please.
1. Appearance age: Young adult (maybe 20?)
2. Biological gender: Male
3. Race trait: Sidhe elf. Elvish ears and features.
4. Wearings, accessories, and equipment: Wears light leather armour covered by a dark over-cloak that also covers most of his hair/ears etc as pictured in the sprite. Carries a short sword and dagger.
5. Personal traits: dark hair (with a streak of white?), younger relative of Faolan who you drew earlier.
6. Possible reference: Sidhe were inspired by the Drow, so outfit something like this (with more face showing) would be nice.
7. Misc: (something like emotion, angle, expression, you name it, goes here): Vaniyera is very fierce. While a capable commander, he is impulsive and strong-willed and extremely fond of getting his own way. He is also haughty, looking down on any non-elves.
Thanks in advance. UO.
I know I've already had a go, so I'm very happy to let others go first, but I thought I'd post another character that I'd like to get a portrait for, please.
1. Appearance age: Young adult (maybe 20?)
2. Biological gender: Male
3. Race trait: Sidhe elf. Elvish ears and features.
4. Wearings, accessories, and equipment: Wears light leather armour covered by a dark over-cloak that also covers most of his hair/ears etc as pictured in the sprite. Carries a short sword and dagger.
5. Personal traits: dark hair (with a streak of white?), younger relative of Faolan who you drew earlier.
6. Possible reference: Sidhe were inspired by the Drow, so outfit something like this (with more face showing) would be nice.
Spoiler:
Thanks in advance. UO.
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But perhaps 'maintainer' is too strong a word.
But perhaps 'maintainer' is too strong a word.
Re: Hold my Bear I got this [DBL's Request thread]
Ok, that would take time to define for each. So dont expect anytime soon.darkbearlab wrote:I fancy doing any portrait but you must follow the rule while you are supposed be able to find easily.Eagle_11 wrote:Well, in my uber default era addon there are plenty of high elves, dark elves, halflings, gnomes, desert nomads, dwarves, so if you fancy doing an portrait for any of the units in there that already does not already have one feel free to do so.
Superb art btw.
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Re: Hold my Bear! I got this! [Request thread]
Sketch stage here Since your description in PM is rather confusing this is what I got for now.Vyncyn wrote:...
let me know what is wrong and I might fix.
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Re: Hold my Bear I got this [DBL's Request thread]
Looks great so far.
I have a minor issue with the torso. He seems very thin, while he should have an anverage build.
The scales I tried to describe are hard to critique without colour. They are correct concerning the placement on the body. Concerning the colour, I'm not sure if what I described would be visually pleasing. What I initially wanted was a pale skintone with hints of green and brown/greyish scales. If this doesn't work you could use the colours of the portrait I attached to a previous post in this threat.
I have a minor issue with the torso. He seems very thin, while he should have an anverage build.
The scales I tried to describe are hard to critique without colour. They are correct concerning the placement on the body. Concerning the colour, I'm not sure if what I described would be visually pleasing. What I initially wanted was a pale skintone with hints of green and brown/greyish scales. If this doesn't work you could use the colours of the portrait I attached to a previous post in this threat.
Re: Hold my Bear I got this [DBL's Request thread]
Hi,
I like your works so far, so I'd also like to enlist a character from The Ravagers
The character is elvish king Hirion.
Please don't take the details as limitations of any kind, I just tried to give the best impression I can
Thanks for your work,
WhiteWolf
I like your works so far, so I'd also like to enlist a character from The Ravagers
The character is elvish king Hirion.
- Age: Middle-aged - old in elvish years, but still looks in his prime.
- Gender: Male
- Race: Elvish
- Accessories: Wears battle-gear, finest elvish armour, sword and crown. Long green cape on the back.
- Traits: Positive character, king of the Greenwood, king of the main character of the campaign, and should look so.
- Misc: He is rich. I mean, very very rich, and he should look so. Armour with finest details and embellishments, sword with golden hilt and ruby pommel, crown of gold and gems. But he's also modest. This means, he's not wearing lots of jewelery, rather few, but those are very fine and look very aristocratic.
Please don't take the details as limitations of any kind, I just tried to give the best impression I can
Thanks for your work,
WhiteWolf
Main UMC campaigns: The Ravagers - now for 1.16, with new bugs!
Old UMC works: The Underness Series, consisting of 5 parts: The Desolation of Karlag, The Blind Sentinel, The Stone of the North, The Invasion Of The Western Cavalry, Fingerbone of Destiny
Old UMC works: The Underness Series, consisting of 5 parts: The Desolation of Karlag, The Blind Sentinel, The Stone of the North, The Invasion Of The Western Cavalry, Fingerbone of Destiny
Re: Hold my Bear I got this [DBL's Request thread]
Beautiful work. I am fortunate enough to have a portrait artist that I work with, but if I didn't, I'd be making some requests for sure.
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Re: Hold my Bear I got this [DBL's Request thread]
So, due to some real life issue, this is all I could get for you for now
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This should, at least, be a good place holder
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This should, at least, be a good place holder
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Re: Hold my Bear I got this [DBL's Request thread]
Very nice.
Either way, thank you very much for the work!!!
For the record, does this mean you'll continue -when real life allows it- or will you move on to the next project?darkbearlab wrote:This should, at least, be a good place holder
Either way, thank you very much for the work!!!