SFault's (franken) art
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Re: SFault's franken art
I think the smaller ones ok, but the bigger one, yer. Needs darker shading towards the bottom.
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Re: SFault's franken art
I darkened the lower part but I think it's too dark now.Frogger5 wrote:I think the smaller ones ok, but the bigger one, yer. Needs darker shading towards the bottom.
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Re: SFault's franken art
Nooooooooooooo. Perfect. Contrast is your friend. Especially when working with round things.
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Re: SFault's franken art
It's not too dark, actually I think you got it just right. This looks very neat, incidentally.
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Re: SFault's franken art
I think if it's that big it would have stopped being a maggot long ago...
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Re: SFault's franken art
These sprites are awesome. And the maggots rock-i thought you said you couldn't scratch-draw? A couple may make their way into my campaign (The Warpworld, Vampire themed) if that's alright with you.
Keep up the good work
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Keep up the good work
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Re: SFault's franken art
This looks great, but I feel the outlines above are too dark. it kinda conflicts with the light direction somewhat, since it's very similar to the shade of the lower outline.
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Re: SFault's franken art
GREAT MAGGOTS! No but really those are amazingly good for a frankenstiener.
Re: SFault's franken art
Sure, go ahead.Vladcara wrote:A couple may make their way into my campaign (The Warpworld, Vampire themed) if that's alright with you.
Here's a bit slimmer and hopefully more rounder version.
Edit: Fixed it a bit.
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Re: SFault's franken art
Sorry for double post, but I noticed that I had screwed the TC's in some sprites. Here are correct colors.
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Re: SFault's franken art
Niiiiice.
I think the maggot could use more texture though.
I think the maggot could use more texture though.
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Re: SFault's franken art
Wow alot of good stuff in this one...
Very nice work SFault.
Very nice work SFault.
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Re: SFault's franken art
Can I have the grey Defaldor? ANimated if possible please?
Re: SFault's franken art
I guess all my stuff is under GPL, so feel free to use it. I would like know where my art is used though. Also, are you talking about the one in Group1 or Group2. I might actually make minimal animations for the first one, otherwise it's all up to you to do animation.Zigg wrote:Can I have the grey Defaldor? ANimated if possible please?
Btw: I will be posting some orc franks soon..