SFault's (franken) art
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Re: SFault's franken art
Try lowering the hood on the second and third, so that the hood comes almost to the eyes.
Your scimitar is looking better, but I would get rid of that dark pixel on the left even still.
Your scimitar is looking better, but I would get rid of that dark pixel on the left even still.
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I like seeing the tops of their head. I would only reccomend lowering the hood on the third, to give a sly look.
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Re: SFault's franken art
Lower hood on the third one. No dark pixels in the scimitars and turned the first one into more bowie knife.
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Re: SFault's franken art
These rouges look great! You did a good job lowering the hood on the level three,
Is the hair hidden or covered by a black shadow on the level two and three, or did the hair change color? I find it hard to tell.
Is the hair hidden or covered by a black shadow on the level two and three, or did the hair change color? I find it hard to tell.
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Re: SFault's franken art
I came up with an idea of level 0 unit without any attacks, but regeneration and low XP demand for the next level. So I created some maggots. This is mainly a practice for creating units from scratch.
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Re: SFault's franken art
SFault wrote:I tried to make sprites from the scratch, but didn't manage to do so. They ended up very ugly. So, I decided to do what I'm pretty good at frankensteining. Here are some of my units. My plan is to make some variations of the heroic units so that they can be used in council-type scenarios with only dialogue. Any comments?
the sprite w/ spear is freaking cool.
Re: SFault's franken art
Its' very cartoony, and more worm than maggot like. Also, it lacks texture.
My spritework can be seen here.
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I love the Zombie Elf Princess and the other undeads.
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Some stripes, grayish color and less-cartoony 'face'. Is it better now? To me it looks quite a messFrogger5 wrote:Its' very cartoony, and more worm than maggot like. Also, it lacks texture.
edit: bit cleaner version
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No mate, that's heaps better. Much better colors, more realistic in both shape and color in fact, and texture! Non existent in your first one, but in this one it's good.
I'm leaning towards the top one as being better. Looks much cleaner artisticwise, look dirty dirtwise.
I'm leaning towards the top one as being better. Looks much cleaner artisticwise, look dirty dirtwise.
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Re: SFault's franken art
Very good! Improved massively from the little cheeto-puff with eyes!
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Indeed. But it's bigger, so lets see more texture, and tonal contrast.
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Re: SFault's franken art
Don't know what kind of texture to add on it, but the tonal contrast looks great IMO. Did the same to the little fellow, but he looks very noisy compared to the bigger one.Frogger5 wrote:Indeed. But it's bigger, so lets see more texture, and tonal contrast.
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Re: SFault's franken art
Heeheehee, love the lil' maggots. They look a lot like the ones I used to... never mind. I had a taste for violence in my youth. These look very nice, but I feel there could perhaps be more shading towards the lower edge of the body, since the body is roughly cylindrical, correct?
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