Work for a [very] amateur sprite artist
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Work for a [very] amateur sprite artist
Well, first off, I'm going to tell you what I can offer
-bad sprites
-average Frankensteins with edits
-Skills of a guy who can only do stuff like this on weekends due to school
An example of a scratch-made sprite (no shadow made yet) is attached
-bad sprites
-average Frankensteins with edits
-Skills of a guy who can only do stuff like this on weekends due to school
An example of a scratch-made sprite (no shadow made yet) is attached
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- Give me a hug!
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Re: Work for a [very] amateur sprite artist
A quick and dirty frankenstein
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- A heavily modified goblin guy
- goblin.png (3.05 KiB) Viewed 2172 times
Re: Work for a [very] amateur sprite artist
After coming back after a couple of hours, I realized that skull on the goblin's spear is awkward and a bit blurred... and is he holding that torch a bit weirdly?
Re: Work for a [very] amateur sprite artist
The first beast looks odd, what is it supposed to be based on ? Kinda reminds me of a teddy bear for some reason.
The goblin guy is better, but as you say the back of the skull lacks outlines and the face is buried partly under his clothes (the bottom bit). The flame is also not great (I know it comes from a real unit, but I think that unit is getting updated anyway).
The goblin guy is better, but as you say the back of the skull lacks outlines and the face is buried partly under his clothes (the bottom bit). The flame is also not great (I know it comes from a real unit, but I think that unit is getting updated anyway).
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Re: Work for a [very] amateur sprite artist
Yeah, the flame with a trail means he's waving it around (or it's being carried along by a guy riding a giant wolf). So either get rid of the tail or move it a bit away from his head so he doesn't burn his ears off.
Re: Work for a [very] amateur sprite artist
Someone please delete this thread
Sorry, I'm gonna start again in a new thread... but based on improving my work
Sorry, I'm gonna start again in a new thread... but based on improving my work