Frogger's art. Possible UMC story art.
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Re: Seljje sprites
The major, major point i'd make: unless the thing in question is actually straight, like a weapon haft, you should very very rarely use dead-straight lines more than around 3 pixels long. They look odd, because things in real life generally aren't dead straight. Of particular note: the l3's cloak edges, and all the helm brims.
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Re: Seljje sprites
Thanks for that ill try to fix itthespaceinvader wrote:The major, major point i'd make: unless the thing in question is actually straight, like a weapon haft, you should very very rarely use dead-straight lines more than around 3 pixels long. They look odd, because things in real life generally aren't dead straight. Of particular note: the l3's cloak edges, and all the helm brims.
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Re: Seljje sprites critique please
an update. Fighters:
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Re: Seljje sprites critique please
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Re: Seljje sprites critique please
what the hell? lol his hair looks like a mound of stringed cheese
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Re: Seljje sprites critique please
Update leveled up speamen
When I say that I mean a member of a phalanx. These will make up the front line defense.
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Re: Seljje sprites critique please
That's awesome. Ignore this next thing if this is because of my weird eyes: Is the shield like... glued... to his stomach? I mean, it's so close to him, I think. Might be just be, though.
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Re: Seljje sprites critique please
I agree about the shield - I think it might just need a drop shadow? Right now, it just flows into his armor.
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ahhhhh i se what you mean, yes ill try and fix that. I just realised, the part thats blending in had a grey outline instead of black and grey is the armor.
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Re: Seljje sprites critique please
The spearman is looking better, but you need to make sure that the curves match at the top and bottom of the shield =)
Specifically that the top curves in the same way as the bottom.
Specifically that the top curves in the same way as the bottom.
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Re: Seljje sprites critique please
actually thats a good point i changed the top curve cus i had really thick black lines but yer ill try and fix it.
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