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Re: IftU Portraits | Update: Ledinor
unfortunately i had no time to work some more on asthrogar. but i'll change the shapes of the quilts, they were really sloppily drawn and i hoped nobody would notice since i really like his postue i won't change the way he's holding his axe, you're right, it would be a little more realistic if it was more asymmetrical, but i don't want to loose the gravity of the figure.
and thanks Noy for the interesting link! really worth listening to if you're interested in portraiture.
and thanks Noy for the interesting link! really worth listening to if you're interested in portraiture.
Re: IftU Portraits | Update: Ledinor
finals for asthorgar and first roughs for elyssa (former nice red mage from utbs, now demonized and heavily reconstructed the shaxthal way)
Re: IftU Portraits | Update: Ledinor
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On a more serious note, Asthorgar looks awesome! I'm likin' that axe.
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Re: IftU Portraits | Update: Ledinor
Asthorgar's belly reads fine now =)
And the elyssa-cyborg looks cool =D I prefer the version with hair, if you want some input on which looks cooler =)
And the elyssa-cyborg looks cool =D I prefer the version with hair, if you want some input on which looks cooler =)
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Re: IftU Portraits | Update: Ledinor
i hope she won't read too borg-like, perhaps i'll change the armour's colour slightly. damn cyborgs...
and i hope both versions will be usefull - there is one scene with her wearing a metal mask and later one without.
and i hope both versions will be usefull - there is one scene with her wearing a metal mask and later one without.
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Re: IftU Portraits | Update: Ledinor
I found myself surprised at how creepy cyborg-Elyssa looks. I'm not sure why I'm surprised; you've certainly demonstrated a diversity of personality types in the past, but something about the skin, face, and jaw armour gives me the chills.kitty wrote:i hope she won't read too borg-like, perhaps i'll change the armour's colour slightly. damn cyborgs...
and i hope both versions will be usefull - there is one scene with her wearing a metal mask and later one without.
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Re: IftU Portraits | Update: Ledinor
Must be too long since I played the game. Cyborgs.
Perhaps I minor nitpick the mask feels to rounded and a bit tpo wide at the top. Just my 2 cents.
Perhaps I minor nitpick the mask feels to rounded and a bit tpo wide at the top. Just my 2 cents.
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Re: IftU Portraits | Update: Ledinor
Cool cyborg Elyssa! But she does look a lot like Borgs...
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Re: IftU Portraits | Update: Ledinor
Maybe uncover the belly in the right one? I don't know the character, but the two pictures seem like they capture different extremes:
left one has a human body and metal head
right one has a metal body and human head.
I think a combination would look nice (not that they don't already look nice, they are in fact both quite good ).
left one has a human body and metal head
right one has a metal body and human head.
I think a combination would look nice (not that they don't already look nice, they are in fact both quite good ).
Re: IftU Portraits | Update: Ledinor
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Re: IftU Portraits | Update: Ledinor
don't worry so much if it looks like borg...
it's wicked awesome looking!
it's wicked awesome looking!
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Re: IftU Portraits | Update: Ledinor
Just to be different, I'm gonna say I got more of a RoboCop feel from Elyssa (remember, towards the end of the first movie we see Officer Murphy's face after he removes his upper head covering). I always wondered what happened to her.
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Re: IftU Portraits | Update: Elyssa
thanks for all your replies! here are preliminary finished versions of both forms of elyssa.
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Re: IftU Portraits | Update: Elyssa
Wow...!
That's one of the coolest things I've ever seen!
I just have to ask, what is the rubbles in the right arm?
That's one of the coolest things I've ever seen!
I just have to ask, what is the rubbles in the right arm?
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Re: IftU Portraits | Update: Elyssa
that would be shirvelled skin where muscle has deteriorated, and fat been used up, I think.woodmouse wrote:Wow...!
That's one of the coolest things I've ever seen!
I just have to ask, what is the rubbles in the right arm?
looking awesome kitty BTW