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I'm posting my images for the Scout Campaign here, so you can comment.
First, a unit image for a female main character. Do you think it's ok? Or what should I improve?
First, a unit image for a female main character. Do you think it's ok? Or what should I improve?
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Better the arms look a bit short though. And the cape could need a bit more darker shades.
Some extras perhaps too? She looks a bit empty.
Some extras perhaps too? She looks a bit empty.
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The Elvish Shyde also has one...Sgt. Groovy wrote:The miniskirt looks out of time and place.
This is the version I will use now in my campaign, unless there are stil some big problems.
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Well the cape she holds needs some more shades.
I'm with Groovy here, for someone who is holding a cape as well the skirt is a bit short. A longer skirt with a lighter color would add a counterweight to the the one on here back.
I'm with Groovy here, for someone who is holding a cape as well the skirt is a bit short. A longer skirt with a lighter color would add a counterweight to the the one on here back.
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Just a thought instead of calling this thread :
You should call itart thread for my campaign
it makes it easier to navigate."name of campaign" art thread
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Her posture looks Impossible, it looks like she is sitting on a chair that isn't there. I agree that the minie skirt does not look right.
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