Yeti Portrait
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This portrait is not bad, though the purple face is a little strange, as neither the wesnoth unit neither most of the yeti drawings are like that.
Also, he looks a little to friendly to me, he isn't attacking or looking very dangerous here.
Other than that the drawing is pretty good.
Also, he looks a little to friendly to me, he isn't attacking or looking very dangerous here.
Other than that the drawing is pretty good.
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You sure about that?Tux2B wrote:This portrait is not bad, though the purple face is a little strange, as neither the wesnoth unit neither most of the yeti drawings are like that.
I think that he should have hair covering his eyes (it's more or less that way in the unit image). He's a special unit anyway, and not seeing the eyes would make him appear even more "mysterious", for lack of a better term. Also, more fuzzyness would be nice, the hair is indeed quite flat.
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I think the face should have some highlighting, IMHO it looks a little flat and doesnt fit in with the rest of the portrait otherwise, more like a silhouette than a portrait, maybe some dark grey sections near the nose and eyes. I really like the teeth though, and the fur doesnt look flat to me.
good luck.
good luck.
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IMO, you should more look at the general impression you get of a unit than what you see when you zoom in. Maybe you can make the face a little less white, like it is on the normal size unit, but this is too purple. It gives you the impression that the yeti is frozen.zookeeper wrote:You sure about that?Tux2B wrote:This portrait is not bad, though the purple face is a little strange, as neither the wesnoth unit neither most of the yeti drawings are like that.
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