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The chimney and belltower (?) look separate from the rest of the structure. Other than that, it's pretty good.
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Human Village variation?

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What do you think?
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??? How did you reply before the post?

Anyway, IMHO it looks a little big.
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It fits perfectly; I tested.
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I didn't mean too big for the hex, I meant just looked slightly large and...daunting...
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Emmanovi wrote:??? How did you reply before the post?
Forum error.

As to the graphics, the tower thingy looks a bit too flat. other than that, nice work!
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Post by Emmanovi »

Elvish Pillager wrote:
Emmanovi wrote:??? How did you reply before the post?
Forum error.

As to the graphics, the tower thingy looks a bit too flat. other than that, nice work!
Hmm... OK...
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That tree under the chimney needs some help. Did someone try to burn it down? :D
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I agree that the belltower, chimnet and tree all look a little off and different from the rest of the image, but just a little. Can't put my finger on why. Otherwise its good looking, I like the idea.
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Huh, I think the chimney looks ok, but the shadow behind it could use some work. To be specific, the chimney should have a shadow, higher than the roof of the house. The belltower, I agree, could use a little tweaking. Maybe make it come down a little further on the front corner and right edge. Also, make that right edge a little straighter. But it's close.

Also, perhaps, the belltower should cast a hint of shadow across the roof.

Overall, once again, really fine work, Zeb.
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Post by Jetrel »

Some minor tweaks needed, but yeah, this is good.
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Post by Zebulon »

Ok, how about now?
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Much better! I like it!!!
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Agreed.
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Freim: Good enough to be added in.
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