Human Village variation?
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The chimney and belltower (?) look separate from the rest of the structure. Other than that, it's pretty good.
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Human Village variation?
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As to the graphics, the tower thingy looks a bit too flat. other than that, nice work!
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That tree under the chimney needs some help. Did someone try to burn it down?
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Huh, I think the chimney looks ok, but the shadow behind it could use some work. To be specific, the chimney should have a shadow, higher than the roof of the house. The belltower, I agree, could use a little tweaking. Maybe make it come down a little further on the front corner and right edge. Also, make that right edge a little straighter. But it's close.
Also, perhaps, the belltower should cast a hint of shadow across the roof.
Overall, once again, really fine work, Zeb.
Also, perhaps, the belltower should cast a hint of shadow across the roof.
Overall, once again, really fine work, Zeb.
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