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Well, I've taken my own sweet time about it, but I finally have something to present. Lamentably, it isn't much: a single frame of a Rebel flag. The additional frames should be pretty straight forward, but I thought I'd present it now to see if any changes need be made before I continue.
I had a hard time following the top–left to bottom–right wave as on the Knalgan flag with this style banner, so I eventually gave up. I think the flags vary in style enough that it doesn't matter as much, and that a longer banner will be blown differently than the short Knalgan one.
Some in–game shots (taken from The Elves Besieged):
The crossbar needs a little work, and the top could possibly use a change. For fun, I tried making the pole a little rougher with a split top (like a very straight, worn branch), but then realized that this flag would be used for Mermen too, which might look strange. I am still a little concerned that it still doesn't look fluidly fabric–like enough, but maybe the other frames will fix that illusion.
I have some ideas for the Northerner and Drake flags, too.
Please share your thoughts.
I had a hard time following the top–left to bottom–right wave as on the Knalgan flag with this style banner, so I eventually gave up. I think the flags vary in style enough that it doesn't matter as much, and that a longer banner will be blown differently than the short Knalgan one.
Some in–game shots (taken from The Elves Besieged):
The crossbar needs a little work, and the top could possibly use a change. For fun, I tried making the pole a little rougher with a split top (like a very straight, worn branch), but then realized that this flag would be used for Mermen too, which might look strange. I am still a little concerned that it still doesn't look fluidly fabric–like enough, but maybe the other frames will fix that illusion.
I have some ideas for the Northerner and Drake flags, too.
Please share your thoughts.
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Longer and thinner would look better - it took me a moment to notice that there was any difference from the Knalgan one apart from the hammer head on top, and these should be instantly distinguishable.
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Yep. Like, twice as long, half as wide.thespaceinvader wrote:Longer and thinner would look better - it took me a moment to notice that there was any difference from the Knalgan one apart from the hammer head on top, and these should be instantly distinguishable.
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Sorry for the late reply. Longer and thinner it is: It's a little rough, just thrown together to get the idea. Closer to what you're looking for?Jetryl wrote:Yep. Like, twice as long, half as wide.thespaceinvader wrote:Longer and thinner would look better - it took me a moment to notice that there was any difference from the Knalgan one apart from the hammer head on top, and these should be instantly distinguishable.
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Maybe should be a little thinner still, it looks very large at the moment.
Back when i did the Loyalists and Knalgans flag (and my attempts at Northeners and Drakes flag to) i made a conscious effort to make all flags look very different but cover roughly the same amount of area.
I did this to make sure that no flag looked more important then the other.
But wait for Jetryls word on if that is something worth considering.
Back when i did the Loyalists and Knalgans flag (and my attempts at Northeners and Drakes flag to) i made a conscious effort to make all flags look very different but cover roughly the same amount of area.
I did this to make sure that no flag looked more important then the other.
But wait for Jetryls word on if that is something worth considering.
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The length looks about right, but it's still too wide. You could probably stand to lengthen the split, too.
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I agree with TSI on longer split.
And maybe there could more "ends" (hope you'll understand what I mean) - let's say 3? I dunno if it is OK for Rebels, but I thought of adding more variety to the flags.
And maybe there could more "ends" (hope you'll understand what I mean) - let's say 3? I dunno if it is OK for Rebels, but I thought of adding more variety to the flags.
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Nice idea, makl... this flag is too thin to have more than one split, but it could work on another flag...makl wrote:And maybe there could more "ends" (hope you'll understand what I mean) - let's say 3? I dunno if it is OK for Rebels, but I thought of adding more variety to the flags.
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Two billows instead of one would go far.
By this I mean, it only bends in the middle, such a long flag should have more than one ripple?
By this I mean, it only bends in the middle, such a long flag should have more than one ripple?
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Perhaps it should have a less dynamic normal position, and save any indication of movement for the animation.
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QFT - this image won't ever be seen still, so wait to comment until it's animated...Turuk wrote:Perhaps it should have a less dynamic normal position, and save any indication of movement for the animation.
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Well, at least I play Wesnoth with most animations turned off (as I’m using a tired laptop), so a neutral flag pose would in fact look less strange.thespaceinvader wrote:QFT - this image won't ever be seen still, so wait to comment until it's animated...
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Probably one of the frames will come out reasonably neutral...
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