Skeleton Warrior portait

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Re: Skeleton Warrior portait

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Put some level curves on that dude!
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Re: Skeleton Warrior portait

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Do you mind explaining yourself? I'm not following what you're saying. Besides the fact that the picture is now brightened. If that's what you mean, then it's supposed to be dark, it's creepy.
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Re: Skeleton Warrior portait

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When I compare the two, the original seems overly blurry, not sure why though.

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Re: Skeleton Warrior portait

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AI wrote:When I compare the two, the original seems overly blurry, not sure why though.
It's darker, the lines aren't as defined. So that's why it seems more blurry.
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Re: Skeleton Warrior portait

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would it be possible to remove the arrow ? it looks "cheap" and the way it's drawn just on the piece of armour that provides a background bright enough to see it is cheap too...

it think the portrait would be better without it.

and it's a great portrait, apart from that
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Re: Skeleton Warrior portait

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Boucman wrote:would it be possible to remove the arrow ? it looks "cheap" and the way it's drawn just on the piece of armour that provides a background bright enough to see it is cheap too...

it think the portrait would be better without it.

and it's a great portrait, apart from that
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I was hoping somebody would say that, It's not originally my pic, it's Girgistians. He had another arrow in it as well, I took it out when I fixed the ribs. I was mainly hoping somebody would say something because I didn't want to be the only one who thought that, and take it out on that reason.
Thanks for saying it's good though, I was starting to think I had done everything wrong.
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Re: Skeleton Warrior portait

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The arrows did originally go between the ribs, though.
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Re: Skeleton Warrior portait

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Girgistian wrote:The arrows did originally go between the ribs, though.
yeah, an arrow stuck in the cage rib would look better, but you would need a much bigger arrow, and I'm not even sure it would look good because of the black background...

I still think it would be better without it
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Re: Skeleton Warrior portait

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I'm late in this....I've been extremely distracted, and had other things I needed to do. :oops:

Removed the arrow. If I need to do anything else to the ribs, let me know. I might be a while longer, since I got distracted last time so easily.
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