Wolf Rider portrait
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Re: Wolf Rider portrait
Agreed, this looks more like an alligator's set of teeth, carnivorous mammals generally have more irregular jagged teeth for tearing meat apart: http://www.nps.gov/archive/yell/slidefi ... /14620.jpg (not inlined because it's in hugebig format. )torangan wrote:Nice picture, but take a look at a larger dog to get a feeling for how wolves teeth look like. They're the only thing bothering me here.
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Re: Wolf Rider portrait
here is another reference pic.
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Thanks. I'll repair the teeth someday soon. If something seems bad to someone I'd like to know about it before I post the next version of this thing.
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Well, the rider doesn't look like a goblin to me. This is just my opinion, not based on any goblin facts.
It's a good picture, though. I like your all your wolf drawings.
It's a good picture, though. I like your all your wolf drawings.
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Re: Wolf Rider portrait
I love it.Girgistian wrote:Apparently I had time after all.
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Re: Wolf Rider portrait
Right, I fixed the teeth. Here's the new version, both the original one and the portrait sized.
EDIT:
-fixed the stripe I thought I had already fixed before.
-eyes made less saturated
-eyesight fixed
EDIT:
-fixed the stripe I thought I had already fixed before.
-eyes made less saturated
-eyesight fixed
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Re: Wolf Rider portrait
You've got a stripe of very dark brown/grey on the left hand side of the background (possibly not visible due to lack of monitor contrast - i can only see it at certain angles) but aside from that this looks good to me =)
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Re: Wolf Rider portrait
Thanks, fixed it. I thought I had already gotten rid of those. If this is generally good enough then I think it's pretty much finished on my part. If Jetryl thinks it can be added to the game, it's all yours. Unless there's something more to fix in it.
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Yeah, the eyes look far to saturated, agreed that it would have yellow eyes, but not that perfect.
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Re: Wolf Rider portrait
Nice portrait, Girgistian. I particularly like the way you've done his leather jerkin; the combination of banded shading and oversized stitching gives the impression of that it was crafted using primitive tools; just as I'd expect goblin armour would be.
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Tampered with the eyes a bit as well. If this is commitworthy, you can have it.
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Did you forget to attach it?
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Re: Wolf Rider portrait
No he just edited his post a bit up the page and changed the pictures there.
Edit: looks great by the way.
Edit: looks great by the way.
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Re: Wolf Rider portrait
Right you are. I should have mentioned that.JAP wrote:No he just edited his post a bit up the page and changed the pictures there.
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