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- thespaceinvader
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Xanthos looks kinda like an old black woman, and not a huge amount like an evil necromancer. A very nicely drawn old black woman, though =D
The elvish girl has potential IMHO - with development she could make a decent Druid. But you'd need to improve the arms - the staff arm is bent at a very awkward angle - the upper arm is a little too long, and the hand should be coming basically straight out of the screen towards camera. The other hand looks a little awkward, but i can't work out why.
It's a good start =)
The elvish girl has potential IMHO - with development she could make a decent Druid. But you'd need to improve the arms - the staff arm is bent at a very awkward angle - the upper arm is a little too long, and the hand should be coming basically straight out of the screen towards camera. The other hand looks a little awkward, but i can't work out why.
It's a good start =)
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Is it just me or her hips are excessively protuberant... oh well, it might be because I'm not really used to the females' anatomy. >.>
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You are probably outdated:
The current L1 -> L2 -> L3 darkies line sprites, as of BfW 1.3.11.
The current L1 -> L2 -> L3 darkies line sprites, as of BfW 1.3.11.
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Still looks fairly female o_O xanthos is a guy IIRC. But definitely more necromacer-like.
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Getting there. And agreed with the above.
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Very very much better, and fit the current sprites perfectly.
Although... um, the male sprite isn't bald. But it's not necessarily a problem.
Although... um, the male sprite isn't bald. But it's not necessarily a problem.
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Shadow Master wrote:Very very much better, and fit the current sprites perfectly.
Although... um, the male sprite isn't bald. But it's not necessarily a problem.
And the skull bag is so coooool
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