3rd Level Undead Archer
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3rd Level Undead Archer
OK, I've been working on this for a little while, and it's reached a standard where I'm happy to present it for comments. This is the 3rd level Skeleton Archer / Bone Shooter, which I'm using the working title "Soul Shooter" for.
At the moment, I'm looking for comments on stance, position, flaws and details. Once that's done, I might put together some different colour variations, to see what looks best.
At the moment, I'm looking for comments on stance, position, flaws and details. Once that's done, I might put together some different colour variations, to see what looks best.
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i would like to see it with a sinister cloak and some kind of hat...
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Whoa. Attached something like that.
Sangel that's a cool unit. For the original, the hair/cloak looks like it could use higher highs in the shading. I agree that right arm could be raised a pixel, and more shading on towards the outer edge of the cross-straps. With the shading on the brown top stuff as is, it's hard to tell if it's a cloak or long hair, so I went ahead and cloak-ed in the middle of some reshading. Also changed color, or it would've looked red-riding-hood-ish with the extended cloak.
Sangel that's a cool unit. For the original, the hair/cloak looks like it could use higher highs in the shading. I agree that right arm could be raised a pixel, and more shading on towards the outer edge of the cross-straps. With the shading on the brown top stuff as is, it's hard to tell if it's a cloak or long hair, so I went ahead and cloak-ed in the middle of some reshading. Also changed color, or it would've looked red-riding-hood-ish with the extended cloak.
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use blood-red [1] clothes, black cloak. have the cloak be a bit longer, IMHO.
Although pink is different than everything else, that is not a good thing. I think it would be good if the Boneshooter was changed too, so it didn't look so... wierd.
[1]: Dark red, but Blood Red sounds cooler.
Although pink is different than everything else, that is not a good thing. I think it would be good if the Boneshooter was changed too, so it didn't look so... wierd.
[1]: Dark red, but Blood Red sounds cooler.
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