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- Thrawn
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now that we have the new mages, we can start on portraits...
w00t
EDIT: cleaner, but not inked, just the outline
w00t
EDIT: cleaner, but not inked, just the outline
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this goes for they're/their/there as well
this goes for they're/their/there as well
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less anime, more mirror for youEru wrote:chin is a bit thick IMO
maybe ?
seriously though, look in a mirror from 3/4ths view. The head doesn't attach to the nezk via the jawline (that goes up to the ear), but rather that more straight piece of skin. Although yes, the jawline does need to be defined, it won't be as extreme as you show, and it won't have a line (maybe), only shading.
wshultzbach: thats the scarf-like thing shown in the sprite.
...please remember that "IT'S" ALWAYS MEANS "IT IS" and "ITS" IS WHAT YOU USE TO INDICATE POSSESSION BY "IT".--scott
this goes for they're/their/there as well
this goes for they're/their/there as well
but i did look in a mirror =( , usually when i do lineart i tend to draw the edges , and the jaw is an edge , so do whatever u like anyway =)Thrawn wrote:less anime, more mirror for youEru wrote:chin is a bit thick IMO
maybe ?
seriously though, look in a mirror from 3/4ths view. The head doesn't attach to the nezk via the jawline (that goes up to the ear), but rather that more straight piece of skin. Although yes, the jawline does need to be defined, it won't be as extreme as you show, and it won't have a line (maybe), only shading.
wshultzbach: thats the scarf-like thing shown in the sprite.
don't rip my avatar =(
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I'll be blunt: he looks fat. Almost obese.Thrawn wrote:seriously though, look in a mirror from 3/4ths view. The head doesn't attach to the nezk via the jawline (that goes up to the ear), but rather that more straight piece of skin. Although yes, the jawline does need to be defined, it won't be as extreme as you show, and it won't have a line (maybe), only shading.
This is not necessarily a bad thing, though.
Thrawn wrote:less anime, more mirror for you
I wonder which Kestenvarn was looking at...Kestenvarn wrote:I'll be blunt: he looks fat. Almost obese.
The portrait doesn't look obese (his torso is much too lean for that). He's round-faced, which is a nice change from the anime, elven-style teenage faces littering the game - IMBO (in my biased opinion). I'll go leave you art guys to it now that I said what I wanted... (go color, Thrawn!)
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I see no problem with the chubby face, unless mages are expected to live by very ascetic standards.
The hood looks more like chunk of clay than a hood, though. Here's few references:
More can be Googled up.
The hood looks more like chunk of clay than a hood, though. Here's few references:
More can be Googled up.
Tiedäthän kuinka pelataan.
Tiedäthän, vihtahousua vastaan.
Tiedäthän, solmu kravatin, se kantaa niin synnit
kuin syntien tekijätkin.
Tiedäthän, vihtahousua vastaan.
Tiedäthän, solmu kravatin, se kantaa niin synnit
kuin syntien tekijätkin.
... You need to get your perception of perspective checked. Seems to me you're doing some jaw-shaving surgeries. ;PEru wrote:Made a small analysis for my own amusement ... you can discuss if it's right or wrong
IMHO , the line he drew looks more like the blue one.
It's true that the current jawline makes the face look chubby, but the jaw is generally shaped like a square. And I don't have anything against a chubby mage: they're academics, in a time when academics are feared without needing to maintain a physically fit body. (You don't like how I look? Then burn!)
By the way, which mage is this for? Silver?
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it is...that is what I said. And you do shave off parts of the jawline in all of the photos anyways.Eru wrote:
IMHO , the line he drew looks more like the blue one.
...please remember that "IT'S" ALWAYS MEANS "IT IS" and "ITS" IS WHAT YOU USE TO INDICATE POSSESSION BY "IT".--scott
this goes for they're/their/there as well
this goes for they're/their/there as well