Cave spider revamp
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The thing that immediately leaps out at me re: the legs is that they aren't anti-aliased - they look incredibly pixelated. (If you're using the GIMP, just use the paintbrush tool rather than the pencil).Dragon Master wrote:abdomen fix and added most of the legs (no claws). They still look a bit bad to me, perhaps I should make them a pixel thicker?
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To avoid the harvestman look, the legs should be thicker, and taper towards the tip. Also, they could be more streched out. Few pictures for reference: 1, 2,3,4.
Sure, but not the horses, wolves, sea serpents, or any other animals in the game have unexpected number of eyes.We're talking about a monstrous beast in a fantasy world here. Complete adherence to real world biology is not required.
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The legs (especially the rear ones) are very 'bunched up'. They should be more spread out like this guy:
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Hmm? There was a thread about this very same subject a while ago. I took my tries there too but people said they were off perspective. And by judging their advice Dragon Masters spidey is more off perspective than my two tryouts.
Here's the thread.
And those two spiders I made (both with bad perspective as I understood it):
Here's the thread.
And those two spiders I made (both with bad perspective as I understood it):
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Hmm, make the second one black and with bigger red eyes, and we'll see what turns out. Both are great, but yes, not cave spiders but... Lava spiders.
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Well, here's Martenzos idea. Grey, but big red eyes didn't look as good as these.
But I am making a tarantula-style spidey also. All my work looks pretty much like that in their beginning stages.
I posted it so Dragon Master can, if he wants, take a hack at it.
But... perhaps it really should be a web-spinner... Hmm...
Has anyone anything against having two kinds of giant spiders in the league of monsters? I can whip up a cfg with decently balanced stats if it comes to it.
But I am making a tarantula-style spidey also. All my work looks pretty much like that in their beginning stages.
I posted it so Dragon Master can, if he wants, take a hack at it.
But... perhaps it really should be a web-spinner... Hmm...
Has anyone anything against having two kinds of giant spiders in the league of monsters? I can whip up a cfg with decently balanced stats if it comes to it.
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