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viorc
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Swamp village

Post by viorc » October 26th, 2006, 4:33 am

mog wrote:Oops... I just noticed that the tar.gz-file was not up-to-date (this seems to happen to me quite often...). Please remove the village-swampwater-small.png from svn and commit http://yavin.mogsoft.de/~mog/wesnoth/vi ... water2.png instead.
Something bothers me in the image of the village in the new swamp (awesome in any other aspects) : there is something floating in front of the village.
Is it a fisherman's net ? Some flag ? The trace of my dirty cursor on the screen ? I can't tell but I do not think it is so graceful.
Wouldn't it better if there only a dock with nothing on it ?
Not that I am a art contributor or anything ... ;)
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Post by XJaPaN » October 26th, 2006, 5:33 am

Now that you mention it, yours looks better actually. I also cant figure out what that grey thingy is supposed to be, looks a bit like a net.

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Re: Swamp village

Post by Oreb » October 26th, 2006, 5:47 am

IMHO, it must be a net. But it isn't done that well.
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Post by Sapient » October 26th, 2006, 6:38 am

I always assumed it was a big spiderweb. In that case, it would kind of fit for undead villages.
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Post by mog » October 26th, 2006, 11:09 am

It is supposed to be a fishing net. If somebody likes to improve it, he's welcome to do so. The version without the net is a bit too empty imho.

The gimp source file can be found here: http://yavin.mogsoft.de/~mog/wesnoth/vi ... pwater.xcf
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Post by Tux2B » October 26th, 2006, 11:39 am

Maybe there could be a ladder? Or a kind of boat below the hut so the inhabitants can move around?
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