It looks good. I think that the line between the side and front of the tent could be more distinct, though. It would help make it cleared that it was a tent.
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I thought so. Well, it provides the perfect base for cleaning up and turning into the finished image, because all the shapes/lines are in place and in proportion.
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Radic wrote:Do you think it needs more sharpening up, after all this is made of wood so it should kind of look "fuzzy"
The outlines need sharpening, but the inside of the wood looks perfect.
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Radic wrote:here is another one. It should be mush sharper now.
More contrast yes, sharper no. Really, the lines between the stakes should be a single pixel wide, and all the shapes involved need to be uniform. That'll change it from "fuzzy" to "sharp".
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Just wanted to say I think it's great that we are finally getting artwork for a military camp, so every base doesn't have to be a castle. The hand-drawn image is the right idea, someone just needs to go through it and convert it to a pixel image that has more even dimensions. Though perhaps every stake shouldn't be exactly the same width, less it look too fake.