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by Sangel » April 3rd, 2004, 4:25 am
It's a third level unit... perhaps a bow and a sword?
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by Sangel » April 3rd, 2004, 4:34 am
As, for instance, in this picture?
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by Christophe33 » April 3rd, 2004, 8:31 am
It looks nice, maybe you could raise the bow by a pixel or two to make it more obvious. The bow shooting frames needs a bit of work, the bow looks too fuzzy.
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by turin » April 3rd, 2004, 2:13 pm
Sangel wrote: Why here it is. I think you're going blind, Turin.
No, i still is not in the previous post.
I like the new pcture, but with the bow and sword it looks like a mounted avenger. OK if this is what you want, but it looks somewhat strange.
(i really like the white horse!)
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by Sangel » April 3rd, 2004, 8:02 pm
OK, unfuzzy bow in the first attack frame, and slightly modified standard stance with a more prominent bow.
Any final suggestions?
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by Dave » April 3rd, 2004, 8:04 pm
IMO he should pull the bow string further back, and have the bow bend with the tension more.
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by Sangel » April 3rd, 2004, 8:17 pm
You're keeping in mind that this is the first frame of two, right?
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by Dave » April 3rd, 2004, 8:55 pm
Yeah...imo it should go back further than the second frame.
When you pull a bow string back, you pull it back a long way, making the wood bend.
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by Darth Fool » April 3rd, 2004, 9:02 pm
When shooting a bow, typically the hand with the string goes back all the way to your cheek.
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by Kamahawk » April 3rd, 2004, 9:05 pm
Darth Fool wrote: When shooting a bow, typically the hand with the string goes back all the way to your cheek.
None of the other archers in wesnoth do this.
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by Sangel » April 3rd, 2004, 9:07 pm
Well, the flex of the bow is identical to that in a standard archer... nevertheless, here's a version with the hand slightly further back and a little more flex in the bow.
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by Dave » April 3rd, 2004, 9:15 pm
Kamahawk wrote: Darth Fool wrote: When shooting a bow, typically the hand with the string goes back all the way to your cheek.
None of the other archers in wesnoth do this.
This is true.
IMO they should
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by Kamahawk » April 3rd, 2004, 9:18 pm
Dave wrote: This is true.
IMO they should
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Feel free to redo all 10+ archer images in the game, no one is stoping you.
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by Dave » April 3rd, 2004, 9:33 pm
Kamahawk wrote: Dave wrote: This is true.
IMO they should
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Feel free to redo all 10+ archer images in the game, no one is stoping you.
Guess what I'm going to say next time you ask for a feature to be implemented. *grin*
Seriously though, I think the archers in the game look good, I would just kinda like it if they pulled their bowstrings back further. It's not a big deal though. This also isn't the first time I've expressed this opinion.
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by Sangel » April 3rd, 2004, 9:34 pm
*Ahem* Other archers aside - how does this one look?
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