Dragon Portrait:(back from the dead)
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Dragon Portrait:(back from the dead)
Yo, I've been working on a dragon portrait for the dragon campaign me and niceman(soon to be renamed) are working on. I'm really in the dark as to if it fits Wesnoth style. Please tell me if anything is wrong, stuff like perspective, colors, proprtions, etc. Please note: I havent applied shading yet so this isn't the final version
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The expression on the face reminds me of Beavis.
He looks pretty cool. I agree with XJaPaN on the proportions. I know you said you aren't finished with the colors yet, but you might want to take a look at some fantasy artwork with gold armor; gold is very reflective, so it should not be one solid color.
He looks pretty cool. I agree with XJaPaN on the proportions. I know you said you aren't finished with the colors yet, but you might want to take a look at some fantasy artwork with gold armor; gold is very reflective, so it should not be one solid color.
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Anti aliasing is neccesary
make the longer horn shorter
shade some more, like the eye, face, arms, wings.
make the longer horn shorter
shade some more, like the eye, face, arms, wings.
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also, grey the colors down some, they are oversaturated, and make it hurt my eyes!XJaPaN wrote:You have to work more on the shading because its almost invisible. Use more and darker colors.
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this goes for they're/their/there as well
this goes for they're/their/there as well
Bad posture, bad shape, weird proportions, flat shading... there's a long way to go on this one. It's an ok concept but does it even compare to the existing HTTT portraits? Scathing but true.Dragon Master wrote:Well it's been a while, but I now have shaded my dragon portait. please tell me if anything else needs addressing.
One example (so this is at least a partially constructive post) - look at the torso. It has no depth, it looks flat. It's shape is all wrong. The head is way to large compared to the torso. Dragons should be formidable - looking strong and fearsome. Your portrait has more humour than fear in it.
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