Heir to the Throne dialogue corrections

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jmosher
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Heir to the Throne dialogue corrections

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Here are some quick corrections to the text of "A Choice Must Be Made" and "Home of the North Elves." By the way, if anyone wants to send me raw text from scenarios for proof-reading, I'd be glad to review it before the text gets added. You can use private messaging, I guess.

A Choice Must Be Made
Kalenz says "For a millennia." Should be "For millennia" or "For a millennium."
Kalenz in respose to Li'Sar: "Even thought" should be "Even though"

Home of the North Elves
Eonihar: "Try to reach Eretria." Eretria is a real country, next to Ethiopia. It's a little disorienting to hear it used in this context. How about Erestria or Erentria?
Joshua
Lysander
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Eritrea

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--Lysander--
jmosher
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Re: Eritrea

Post by jmosher »

Lysander wrote:Actually, it is named Eritrea.
Hah! I swapped the vowels. Well, so it *sounds* a lot like an African nation....
Joshua
quartex
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Post by quartex »

I doubt jmosher will be the last person to make that mistake, I too would strongly suggest a name change.
jmosher
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Blackwater Port

Post by jmosher »

Seimus: "Your arrival bring us" should be "brings us"
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