Dialogue editing for non-native English speakers

[Daravel]

I've been busy finishing my work on TSoG. I'll get to your 8th scenario as soon as I can. Apologies for the delay.

[Adamant14]

No problem

[Daravel]

Here's the 8th scenario.

Edit:
speaker=second_unit
message= _ "The Dwarves getting assistance."

I was confused by this line, are you trying to say that the Dwarves need assistance?

[Adamant14]

Edit:
speaker=second_unit
message= _ "The Dwarves getting assistance."

I was confused by this line, are you trying to say that the Dwarves need assistance?

The Dwarves are besieged by Undead.
Then Human appear. (they come to aid the Dwarves)
The Undead comment that with:"The Dwarves getting assistance."

I think that's OK


And thanks again for checking my text.

[Daravel]

Ok, then you want "The Dwarves are getting assistance."

[Adamant14]

I'm still working on the next scenarios, but I want to update the campaign.
I added and changed some lines.

Not much text to correct.

[Daravel]

Just letting you know that I haven't forgotten to do your latest file, I know there are only a few lines to change but I'm a little swamped with work right now.

[Daravel]

Sorry for the late reply:

In this line: "There are not many man, trained and able to lead others. You can recruit only two Sergeants in this game." The meaning of game is not clear, do you mean in the scenario or in the campaign?

The text says you can only recruit two Sergeants, but in your changelog you wrote the max is three.

File attached

[Adamant14]

Sorry for the late reply:

Now that you're working on your own campaign you don't have the time for this thread. I understand that.

In this line: "There are not many man, trained and able to lead others. You can recruit only two Sergeants in this game." The meaning of game is not clear, do you mean in the scenario or in the campaign?

In the whole campaign.

The text says you can only recruit two Sergeants, but in your changelog you wrote the max is three.

The limit was formerly three, I decreased it to two.
( seems I didn't change the changelog )

Thanks for the changes.

Best regards
Adamant14

[Daravel]

I'd change "game" to "campaign" in that sentence then.

I can continue editing people's dialogues but I will probably remain at a slow pace as I just agreed to do a re-write for another campaign and am working on my own.

[Daravel]

I've never had the staying power to properly contribute to this project, but with the recent call to arms I'd like to bump this thread.

I will take a look at people's scenarios/campaigns.