The Legend Begins (Story Development)
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Re: The Legend Begins (Story Development)
I really liked the way the plot ultimately ended, and I also liked how the Sky Soul was used to craft a mighty weapon.
I just have something to ask: could you please make it so that the Sky Soul is not destroyed? Firstly, because it would make a huge plot hole (if the gem is destroyed, then Svarballi's soul would be released again), and secondly, because I wish to use it in another campaign
I just have something to ask: could you please make it so that the Sky Soul is not destroyed? Firstly, because it would make a huge plot hole (if the gem is destroyed, then Svarballi's soul would be released again
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Re: The Legend Begins (Story Development)
You have missed one slight detail...The Sky Soul used by Shirzo is the one from the future. So, there are two Sky Souls existing simultaneously. The original one is still at Maat'Kare, intact. The Sky Soul wasn't destroyed, it was disintegrated (a small shard still remains), so Svarballi is still imprisoned in that shard.revansurik wrote:I really liked the way the plot ultimately ended, and I also liked how the Sky Soul was used to craft a mighty weapon.
I just have something to ask: could you please make it so that the Sky Soul is not destroyed? Firstly, because it would make a huge plot hole (if the gem is destroyed, then Svarballi's soul would be released again), and secondly, because I wish to use it in another campaignSpoiler:
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Re: The Legend Begins (Story Development)
I see... Well, I have never been a great fan of time-travelling (it creates far too many paradoxes), but anyway...
PS.: With the original Sky Soul and the shard, there'd be 2 Svarballis...
PS.: With the original Sky Soul and the shard, there'd be 2 Svarballis...
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Re: The Legend Begins (Story Development)
Which will make Hero of Irdya (or possibly End of Chaos) even more interesting...revansurik wrote:I see... Well, I have never been a great fan of time-travelling (it creates far too many paradoxes), but anyway...
PS.: With the original Sky Soul and the shard, there'd be 2 Svarballis...
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