WIP: Short story based off of Ooze mini campaign SPOILERS

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Re: WIP: Short story based off of Ooze mini campaign SPOILERS

Post by LBD » July 29th, 2009, 6:10 am

AI wrote:Is the trainer's name Frist, Frith or Firth? ;)
Gah! Fixed it I think now. Thanks! *Waits for a post so he can post the next chapter*

Chapter 7: Good and Evil
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Re: WIP: Short story based off of Ooze mini campaign SPOILERS

Post by AI » July 30th, 2009, 2:00 am

Master ooze, welcome to lawful good. I prefer the more chaotic side of the spectrum.

Anyway, you can edit your posts or, if you have a valid reason (like wanting to have each chapter in it's own post), double-posting is allowed.
So, no need to wait for others to post before publishing the next chapter.

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Re: WIP: Short story based off of Ooze mini campaign SPOILERS

Post by Turuk » July 30th, 2009, 2:01 am

AI wrote:if you have a valid reason (like wanting to have each chapter in it's own post), double-posting is allowed.
AI speaks the truth, though your fear and hesitation to do so is noted and appreciated.
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Re: WIP: Short story based off of Ooze mini campaign SPOILERS

Post by LBD » July 30th, 2009, 2:22 am

AI wrote:Master ooze, welcome to lawful good. I prefer the more chaotic side of the spectrum.
I love playing with morality in my stories. Good and evil are interesting concepts.

I'm used to double-posting being something one gets quite yelled at, even if one wants each chapter in a different post :-p. But if it's O.K for this specific instance I'll take careful, cautious advantage of it. Thanks!

Chapter 8: Human Magic
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Update: A bout with the sumertime blues is slowing my progress. Expect things to pick up when I'm either undepressed and it's still summer, or back at college and taking Point-Set Topology, Physics 3, Geology and Economics and therefore will not be depressed. Or in translation: I feel like I am worthless and accomplishing nothing since I'm not in classes, and can't get a job in this economy so I'm moping instead of writing. Which means I'm accomplishing LESS. Staring at a wall is 'fun'. My fault, I fell behind in writing, and that's what made me depressed, which is making me fall further behind... I had intended a chapter a day.

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Re: WIP: Short story based off of Ooze mini campaign SPOILERS

Post by LBD » August 1st, 2009, 7:47 am

Here's chapter 9 by the way. Opinions, and advice are appreciated on EVERYTHING. I will fix mistakes once they are pointed out, and already have may times. I decided that writing more was the best way to break out of the summertime blues

Chapter 9: Of bars, booze and compititions
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Edit sumery: Fixed Brock/broke mistake. Will fix other when I have time
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Re: WIP: Short story based off of Ooze mini campaign SPOILERS

Post by Huston » August 1st, 2009, 10:25 am

grammer fix:

This parts of town was mostly abandoned and it caused my host to quiver a tad. -> These parts of town were mostly abandoned and it caused my host to quiver a tad.

spelling fix:

Broke’s sweaty hand closed around mine, and we clasped fingers then stared into each other’s faces across the bar.

Broke's should be Brock's

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