Descent into Darkness revision

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Descent into Darkness revision

Post by nemaara » January 7th, 2019, 6:37 am

This threat is to discuss dialogue revisions to Descent into Darkness, which is part of a project that can be found here: https://github.com/wesnoth/wesnoth/projects/3. Any feedback/comments can either be posted here or in this thread: http://forums.wesnoth.org/viewtopic.php ... 05#p637205. Suggestions are welcome!

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Re: Descent into Darkness revision

Post by Tom_Of_Wesnoth » January 15th, 2019, 10:16 pm

I like the changes you've made, the dialogue seems more more professional and polished now.

However, I would say that Darken Volk uses ellipses in his speech perhaps... too often. It might be worth cutting back on that a bit.

Also, I wonder why you've added skeleton recruits to Malin in scenario 3? I'm not arguing against it, just curious as to why such a change?
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