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Re: Embuck's sprite attempts

Postby Vulpine » May 1st, 2017, 8:42 pm

Her right bicep looks a bit thin to me... it currently appears smaller than the forearm. I'm not sure this is a real problem though.
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Re: Embuck's sprite attempts

Postby Embuck » May 3rd, 2017, 2:06 am

I don't think it's too much of a problem; the leather guard would tend to bulk up her forearm. I'd guess that sort of thing is thick leather, with a quilted padding behind it. Also, she's an elf; they tend to have deceptively slender limbs. Leads to a lot of underestimation. :D
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Re: Embuck's sprite attempts

Postby Vyncyn » May 3rd, 2017, 7:08 am

Just some small things. Her right shoulder is less covered by the cloak than her left; I think it would look better if you add a few pixels on her right soulder and remove a bit from the left one. Her leather guards would look more like leather if you make them brown.
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Re: Embuck's sprite attempts

Postby Embuck » May 3rd, 2017, 2:20 pm

How's the cloak now?
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While cows come in many colors, I'll agree that Brown is more common for commercial leather. The guards are now browner.
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Re: Embuck's sprite attempts

Postby Vyncyn » May 3rd, 2017, 3:22 pm

Cloak and guards are better now imo.
I don't have any suggestions about another advancement.
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