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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by Lordlewis » November 17th, 2018, 1:34 am

Would the wings still look visible while on a grass or other bright terrain?
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat » November 17th, 2018, 9:27 pm

It actually looks not bad: (but I think there is some strange problem with the TC on the arms)
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by ghype » November 17th, 2018, 10:52 pm

this unit does not look like its supposed to move on any other terrain then water. but maybe thats my problem only.

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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by Edwylm » November 17th, 2018, 11:26 pm

Its merely missing a shadow not sure why there is fairy dust on the bottom of the unit where the shadow should be.
as with the TC you have to color it with the TC I have similar issues with my creations too.

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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat » November 19th, 2018, 3:37 am

Edwylm wrote:
November 17th, 2018, 11:26 pm
Its merely missing a shadow not sure why there is fairy dust on the bottom of the unit where the shadow should be.
as with the TC you have to color it with the TC I have similar issues with my creations too.
Thank you for noticing that! Of course :doh: I will put a shadow on it when I get a chance!
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November 17th, 2018, 10:52 pm
this unit does not look like its supposed to move on any other terrain then water. but maybe thats my problem only.
Probably because of the shadow. Though it seems a bit too far down towards the ground so I might raise it slightly. Ideally it should give the impression it is flying so any ideas would be great!
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by ghype » November 19th, 2018, 8:17 am

I have to ask, so this unit hierophant. Does it have a skirt or is that supposed to be a stream of water?

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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by Edwylm » November 19th, 2018, 6:04 pm

its suppose to be a skirt/gown to my understanding

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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat » November 20th, 2018, 10:12 pm

Edwylm wrote:
November 19th, 2018, 6:04 pm
its suppose to be a skirt/gown to my understanding
That was what I was trying to do... :whistle:
ghype wrote:
November 19th, 2018, 8:17 am
I have to ask, so this unit hierophant. Does it have a skirt or is that supposed to be a stream of water?
Yes it kind of does look like water... :hmm: Any suggestions?

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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by ghype » November 20th, 2018, 11:10 pm

is it an advancement for sylph?
if yes, It take out the TC skrit from the norma skirt, keep light colors on chest armour and consider to not use gold on sylph

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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by Lordlewis » November 23rd, 2018, 9:13 am

So are there anymore units that might need a sprite or is the only thing left just the coding for each unit?
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat » November 23rd, 2018, 8:39 pm

ghype wrote:
November 20th, 2018, 11:10 pm
is it an advancement for sylph?
if yes, It take out the TC skrit from the norma skirt, keep light colors on chest armour and consider to not use gold on sylph
Okay, yes I agree that the TC looks out of place. As for the gold and light colors the reason I made those changes was to show the higher level but I agree that it doesn't look right. I will try another approach at making it look higher level and see if it works better.
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So are there anymore units that might need a sprite or is the only thing left just the coding for each unit?
Actually I still have a very long list that I am trying to work through ;) I am not in any particular hurry to release an update unless you would like to use some of the units. Currently I am hoping to make sprites for the Bone Marauder (another advancement after the last sprite you drew), the Doom Bat (though I had a look at the TROW familiar and I don't think it will work for an advancement), Drake Chancellor, Dwarvish Cave Runner, Dwarvish High Alchemist, Elvish Star, Auxiliary Master, Scythe Master, Orcish Strafer, Woodland Enchanter, Dune Marauder lvl 5

Also on my very long list I want to improve the sprites for the: Elvish Swift, Elvish Wayfarer, Ice Fang & Penetrator, Water Naiad, Elvish Heirophant.

Any help would be fantastic! :D

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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat » November 26th, 2018, 1:22 am

More work on the Hierophant but I really am not making it better, just going in circles. I tried silver but then it doesn't look enough like an upgrade.
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat » November 26th, 2018, 1:46 am

Also here is another WIP of the Drake Fire Lord: (there is still a hole in the neck ;) )
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by Edwylm » November 26th, 2018, 3:53 am

The Drake... Well the tail isn't right it should be behind the wings. Also the head would look better being higher. right now looks like more of a defense stance. Also try to make the head a little more bigger to make it fit with the rest of the body.

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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat » November 26th, 2018, 8:21 am

Here is a slight improvement:
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