The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Make art for user-made content.

Moderators: Forum Moderators, Developers

Forum rules
Before posting critique in this forum, you must read the following thread:
Post Reply
User avatar
Lordlewis
Posts: 315
Joined: July 20th, 2016, 11:15 am
Location: All around, every where. All in one place yet I'm there.-Lordlewis

Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by Lordlewis »

I think that looks good, it's just the right size. Also are you still going to put leadership on this line of units?
Gold is great!
Swat them bugs!

User avatar
The_Gnat
Posts: 2129
Joined: October 10th, 2016, 3:06 am
Contact:

Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat »

Lordlewis wrote:
November 9th, 2018, 11:32 pm
I think that looks good, it's just the right size. Also are you still going to put leadership on this line of units?
Hmm, maybe. Though for an ability as powerful as level 4 leadership it seems OP to add it into the middle of a unit line.
Creator of: The Reign of The Lords Era,The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Co-designer of the (not-wesnoth) space combat video game Planet Bounce.

User avatar
The_Gnat
Posts: 2129
Joined: October 10th, 2016, 3:06 am
Contact:

Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat »

Hi here is another dune folk sprite! I turned the bad legacier into the lvl 5 advancement for the dune folk mixed fighter. I believe his current name for the lvl 3 is the Ranger. He is now a match for the other lvl 5 leaders. 8)

Ranger lvl 3:
ranger.png
ranger.png (1.28 KiB) Viewed 2800 times
Confronter lvl 4:
alharb.png
alharb.png (40.32 KiB) Viewed 2800 times
Challenger lvl 5:
challenger.png
challenger.png (6.12 KiB) Viewed 2800 times
Any suggestions for improvements or thoughts? :)
Creator of: The Reign of The Lords Era,The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Co-designer of the (not-wesnoth) space combat video game Planet Bounce.

User avatar
ghype
Posts: 978
Joined: December 13th, 2016, 4:43 pm
Location: Berlin, Germany

Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by ghype »

wow they look very very badass. i like them. the lv5 looks so burtal

EDIT: the lv4 shield is the same as the lv5 and hence feels a bit out of proprotions
but other then that, nice work

User avatar
Lordlewis
Posts: 315
Joined: July 20th, 2016, 11:15 am
Location: All around, every where. All in one place yet I'm there.-Lordlewis

Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by Lordlewis »

Yeah that looks really good, maybe you could find a bigger shield to replace that one though...
Gold is great!
Swat them bugs!

User avatar
The_Gnat
Posts: 2129
Joined: October 10th, 2016, 3:06 am
Contact:

Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat »

ghype wrote:
November 15th, 2018, 8:39 am
wow they look very very badass. i like them. the lv5 looks so burtal

EDIT: the lv4 shield is the same as the lv5 and hence feels a bit out of proprotions
but other then that, nice work
Thank you! :) Yes badass was what I was going for! I feel like this desert conqueror is one guy you would not want to meet when rider your camel down the road ^_^
Lordlewis wrote:
November 15th, 2018, 8:45 am
Yeah that looks really good, maybe you could find a bigger shield to replace that one though...
Okay I will see what I can do! :)

Also here is a revision of the heirophant sprite. I still think it could use a little work to look more impressive.
hierophant.png
hierophant.png (9.61 KiB) Viewed 2792 times
Here is the lvl 4 for comparison:
sylph.png
sylph.png (4.36 KiB) Viewed 2792 times
Creator of: The Reign of The Lords Era,The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Co-designer of the (not-wesnoth) space combat video game Planet Bounce.

User avatar
Edwylm
Posts: 200
Joined: August 24th, 2015, 11:18 pm

Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by Edwylm »

The_Gnat wrote:
November 15th, 2018, 8:49 am

Also here is a revision of the heirophant sprite. I still think it could use a little work to look more impressive.

hierophant.png

Here is the lvl 4 for comparison:

sylph.png
Well for hierophant your missing the wings. and possibly adding a staff or even a elven scepter would work nicely

User avatar
The_Gnat
Posts: 2129
Joined: October 10th, 2016, 3:06 am
Contact:

Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat »

Edwylm wrote:
November 15th, 2018, 7:33 pm
Well for hierophant your missing the wings. and possibly adding a staff or even a elven scepter would work nicely

Thank you! Yes I was trying to decide how to add that in and still make this unit look unique so I will see if I can do so!
Creator of: The Reign of The Lords Era,The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Co-designer of the (not-wesnoth) space combat video game Planet Bounce.

User avatar
The_Gnat
Posts: 2129
Joined: October 10th, 2016, 3:06 am
Contact:

Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat »

New bigger shield:
challenger.png
challenger.png (6.46 KiB) Viewed 2730 times
And an improvement to the legacier's feet:
legacier.png
legacier.png (4.55 KiB) Viewed 2726 times
Creator of: The Reign of The Lords Era,The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Co-designer of the (not-wesnoth) space combat video game Planet Bounce.

User avatar
ghype
Posts: 978
Joined: December 13th, 2016, 4:43 pm
Location: Berlin, Germany

Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by ghype »

These are some nice feet.

User avatar
The_Gnat
Posts: 2129
Joined: October 10th, 2016, 3:06 am
Contact:

Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat »

ghype wrote:
November 16th, 2018, 12:00 am
These are some nice feet.
Yes, before it looked to small proportionally.

Here is a WIP for the lvl 5 pheonix knight:
maverick.png
maverick.png (6.08 KiB) Viewed 2711 times
Creator of: The Reign of The Lords Era,The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Co-designer of the (not-wesnoth) space combat video game Planet Bounce.

User avatar
Lordlewis
Posts: 315
Joined: July 20th, 2016, 11:15 am
Location: All around, every where. All in one place yet I'm there.-Lordlewis

Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by Lordlewis »

Yeah that looks quite good, I always thought that line of advancements to be more separate from the grand marshal, in the sense that the grand marshal is bright and shows more wealth as the war master shows more gray colors.
Gold is great!
Swat them bugs!

User avatar
ghype
Posts: 978
Joined: December 13th, 2016, 4:43 pm
Location: Berlin, Germany

Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by ghype »

So i ding this unit concept but the shield seemed somewhat wrong.
I changed the color to fit its armour and filled some empty pixel which i came across while doing so.
Attachments
maverick.png
maverick.png (8.66 KiB) Viewed 2660 times

User avatar
Edwylm
Posts: 200
Joined: August 24th, 2015, 11:18 pm

Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by Edwylm »

well all you need to do is add in the cape on the left side their is a weird gap without it and yes the shield also looks a bit abnormal.

if this is suppose to be a pheonix knight line it be better giving it a flaming sword. unless its suppose to be like a holy sword but even than one could change the flames from red to a white. another note if you make the pheonix knight have red flames then you might want to give the maverick bluish-white flames as it shows a increase in power.

User avatar
The_Gnat
Posts: 2129
Joined: October 10th, 2016, 3:06 am
Contact:

Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat »

Hi everyone thanks for the advice!! :D

I have tried to add some wings to the Heirophant as suggest. What do you think?
hierophant.png
hierophant.png (10.08 KiB) Viewed 2606 times
ghype wrote:
November 16th, 2018, 1:15 pm
So i ding this unit concept but the shield seemed somewhat wrong.
Thank you that looks great! (the shield was too silver before) I have taken what you have done and added a better cape (and bigger sword 8) )!
maverick.png
maverick.png (6.42 KiB) Viewed 2606 times
Edwylm wrote:
November 16th, 2018, 5:33 pm
if this is suppose to be a pheonix knight line it be better giving it a flaming sword
That is a good idea! I am not very good at drawing flames but I will try to make something that looks decent. :D
Lordlewis wrote:
November 16th, 2018, 9:41 am
Yeah that looks quite good, I always thought that line of advancements to be more separate from the grand marshal, in the sense that the grand marshal is bright and shows more wealth as the war master shows more gray colors.
Yes that was what I was going for! A sort of darker warrior who draws from the magical power of the pheonix.
Creator of: The Reign of The Lords Era,The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Co-designer of the (not-wesnoth) space combat video game Planet Bounce.

Post Reply